Naruto: Child of Chakra [COMPLETE]

do i even need to give a reason besides its the immortal gorilla? nahhhhh Great Great Great Great Great Great Great chap Great Great Great Great

BRO can you somehow add kaguya, even if it's no harem. It would be great. Hope you think about it. Anyone who wants the same like and comment..........................

Here to support my fellow author on his newest work. You have outdone yourself once again with this new story, and I like what I have read so far. And your release schedule is awesome, like for real, kudos for keeping up a steady pace throughout your whole time on this platform. Five stars for you.

Everything else was great except for the character design. Maybe its just that I got used to reading protagonist who are perfect in every way possible in webnovels, but imo it just really makes the narrative tension bland if the protagonist is always right and everyone who opposes him is wrong, that the protagonist have the greatest power, and can achieve anything without a struggle. The only narrative tension I felt was when he fought a god that caused him to lose his village, separate him from his family, and seal himself somewhere for years. Everything else went slowly boring for me afterwards he broke the seal. Since he already attained the powers of god, and always act like he is in the moral high ground without the perspective of the opposing people who mostly act like a cut cardboard. Probably make the readers invested with the side characters and villains, and don’t make the protagonist right all the time, it could still be wholesome without him being an overpowered mary sue. It was pretty comedic and engaging at the start though, slightly better than most of the naruto fanfics in this app. Anyways, keep up the good work !

love everything about this book first of all the characters are portrayed really well and we all hope saiken's farm becomes even more amazing lol

At first you had me interested, but then in the end ultimatley dissapointed. I get that this fanfic is suppose to be wholesome and I like that in a novel although I lowkey didnt even get past chapter 40 due to boredem.

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this soooo much disappointing. why soo much drama just kill people who are to be killed. why so cringe "go Tu YoUR VillAgE AnD DiE oR RemAiN HeRE"

Well, this is my first time writing a review so i apologise for it being dodgy This is the best naruto fic i have read till now and i still might be. The start is interesting and it kept me interested till 150+ chapter but the mc got OP and there was little to no challenge and it started falling off, but there was slice of life after 150 but its just my opinion. So my final words are -- This is a banging fic just read it you ignorant fools!!!! Good job author i enjoyed it

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Will give five star, what do you expect from experienced author? ....................................................................................

I will and can give this 5 out of 5 this was the BEST, this was the only thing I read for around 2-3 it was AMAZING I loved and I loved the ending. but I would absolutely LOVE a part 2 where we follow his sons and daughters but that is for another time and thank for this amazing story I will not call it a fan fic for this was truly the best so again thank so much and have a good time writing and I will have a good time reading til we meet again good sir. (sorry for spelling or grammar mistakes 😅) see ya have a god dag life afternoon night whatever good bye.

The mc is a being similar to the tailed beast as he is made of chakra.He was found as a baby by a tailed beast and brought up by them.So he grew up ignorant of the world and its evil.

I saw alot of unnecessary "horni" as the author describes the female in the book, Im not fond of reading a whole paragraph about how beautiful or seggsy the character is if its not mc's interest. The story started slow but picks up great, just don't like how every potential interest ends up in someone elses hand. Dude straight up refuses Mei, saying some BS age gap but then would be with tsunade in the future. Marvelous character design, say no more Lots of chapters already so binge reading this would definitely be fun Author knows the naruto world so all is good, don't worry it.

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I've been waiting for this. ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎

Just another generic wish fullfitment ff with a plot hole and op ish mc with netural ish mc . .. .. ... .. ... .. ... .... .. .. .. .. .. ... .

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i dont know why i havnt made a review yet but any way this fanfic is one of the best if not best naruto fanfic out there and mister immortal is probably the best author on this site so that goes without saying every single one of his fanfic are the best of the best and i cant wait till his new marvel fanfic comes out on this site.