At first you had me interested, but then in the end ultimatley dissapointed. I get that this fanfic is suppose to be wholesome and I like that in a novel although I lowkey didnt even get past chapter 40 due to boredem.
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Hmm, then you probably stopped at the worst possible time. From the moment he woke up from the crystal he's changed everything in the world. Anyway, I can understand why you didn't like. My writing style is different from most other fast paced fics.
Ah I see, well your writing style was fine my main issue with the 'bored' part is that I like a story that has suspenseful moments or something to make you look forward to and I sadly didn't find any of that in this novel. Although you had a lot of origional ideas in the plot, I didn't find the characters conflicts all that interesting. Usually with wholesome novels I can see how sometimes it can be difficult to add plot with suspenseful conflicts but that's where categorys like comedy come in to play. Anyway don't mind my ranting just my opinion here.
