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Naruto and his system

作者: Scathach_
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What is Naruto and his system

WebNovel で公開されている、Scathach_ の作者が書いた Naruto and his system の小説を読んでください。what if Naruto awakened a system before the ninja academy.fyi I don't update this that much. only when I feel like it...

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what if Naruto awakened a system before the ninja academy. fyi I don't update this that much. only when I feel like it

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[LOADING..] [LOADING.] [LOADING...] ... [ERROR] [PLAYER NOT DETECTED] [REFRESHING.] ... [ERROR] [REFRESHING...] ... [ERROR] ... [ERROR] ... [PLAYER “ERROR” SUCCESSFULLY CONNECTED] [GENERATING NEW BODY.] ... [ERROR] [PLAYER NOT DETECTED] [ERROR] [BODY GENERATED] [GENERATING ABILITIES...] [ERROR] ... [ABILITIES GENERATED] [ERROR] [SEARCHING FOR NEW WORLD..] [PLAYER NOT DETECTED] [ERROR] [BODY GENERATED] [REFRESHING..] [REFRESHING..] ... [ERROR] [ERROR] [PLAYER NOT DETECTED] [WORLD NOT FOUND] [ERROR] [BODY GENERATED] [ERROR] [ABILITIES GENERATED] [REFRESHING.] [REFRESHING.] [ERROR] [REFRESHING.] [REFRESHING...] ... ... An endless noise is piercing his ears. Over and over... Never ending errors. All he could do was stare blank at it with his lifeless eyes waiting and watching for a sign of hope he could cling onto. There was none. Not a thing. Only himself and the ‘system’ in an endless black plane which he grew so familiar with. Years.. Decades.. Centuries.. He lost count long ago, it didn’t matter to him anymore. He never felt like he needed to sleep, eat, or do anything. The only thing that plagued his mind was the never ending boredom this place brought him. Its been so long for him that he forgot how he died. All he knew was that he did die and he was in the process of reincarnation but the system decided that he wasn’t good enough for it. His thoughts were blank and he only grew more and more bored. He wanted an adventure. Something that could excite him out of his infinitely flat existence. And he got it.

JuniorJumble · ファンタジー
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Contracted to the Billionaire Werewolf

“If anyone would not like to see these two couples get married, speak now or forever hold your peace,” the priest boomed, turning his eyes to watch the people that were gathered in the hall. There was silence, somewhere in the background there was a cough followed by a smothered hush but no one objected. The union was indeed made in heaven. The priest wore a small smile on his face, however, as he turned to continue the wedding rites there was a shout from behind him. “Stop.” Almost simultaneously a murmur spread through the people gathered there like a ripple in water. Every single pair of eyes in the hall turned back to look at the tall figure of a man dressed in an expensive tailored suit. Amelia felt her heart thud painfully behind her chest. She looked at Brain but his face was a mask if surprise and horror The man marched briskly to the altar, his face set in a grimace as his cold blue eyes stared ahead, right into Amelia's soul. He reached the altar and walked up the small flight of stairs to reach the priest. “I'm Dylan Moore and I'm taking Amelia Shaw as my wife," he said his cold face fixed on Brain who was staring at Dylan in horror Amelia had everything cut out for her; a good job with nice pay, doting parents, and a budding relationship that was leading to marriage. She couldn’t ask for anything else in life. Until Dylan Moore, an eccentric Billionaire hijacks her during her wedding and claims her for himself. As the events that lead to the interruption of her wedding come to light, she starts to realize that life isn’t always what she made it out to be. Her relationship with Dylan begins with a rocky start but slowly and surely she starts to develop feelings for him, feelings she tried so hard to suppress. But Dylan is shrouded by secrecy and mistakes that he seems like a distant brick wall Can she persuade him to unburden himself to her, to start to feel other emotions besides anger? But more importantly, would she be able to get Dylan to love again?

Author_Raymond · ファンタジー
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Our Affinity Romance

Arya was given a second chance to live, something every dying person would wish for right? But would it have been better if she choose to die than agreeing on a life and death contract? Arya Arthur is the only princess of infinity empire, but her infinity ended when her father, emperor Arthur was killed right before her eyes by her uncle and nephew The people who wanted the whole world all to their selves but nobody can have that so arya knew it was an impossible destructive dream that would lead them to their doom. her family were killed right before her anyway and the most painful part was that the people she trusted and loved were part of the treason If she dies, no one would be left to avenge her family's untimely death With hot tears rolling down her beautiful face, she ran helter skelter for her dear life, but Abel caught up with her and grabbed her by the arm with an unusual grin on his face. Abel Atlas, the man she trusted the most and loved in the whole of infinity empire they even shared a kiss?' Arya scoffed, she must have been stupid when she thought he was the man for her Her only dream is to marry a dangerous, yet harmless man 'guess that's not a dream that would come through in this lifetime' Arya thought within herself and more tears gushed out of her eyes down to her face she is good at sword but right at this moment, it seems even the sword lord has turned his back against her when she accepted to be his pupil, he promised to be there for her but he vanished after he trained her and the last time she saw him......... 'Maybe my life was meant to be a mess from the start'. Arya thought again "Your highness, please surrender your life to lord Tak, that is your only option" Abel said with zero remorse on his face "How do you mean?" Arya frowned "He wants to make you his wife, actually, this is a good thing, since he would be crowned the next emperor in a few days, you have the option to be a queen or....." Atlas paused and sneered into arya's face "A ghost!" he completed his sentence and arya laughed in disgust "Guess what, i like the last option" she said dangerously and in a blink of an eye, she moved towards the edge of the cliff and jumped down "Everyone move!" atlas ordered and the soldiers obliged diligently Meanwhile, a man in his early thirties who has been on the tree all the while grabbed a thin rope and drove down the cliff ~~ ~Arya "arya you made the right decision, its better to die than stoop so low and sell off your pride, if this is what the heaven wants, then so be it, forgive me for all my sins lord" i thought silently and closed my eyes for the worst to happen A fresh tear trickled down my face..... But suddenly i felt like I'm in someone's embrace, i didn't fall Did someone perhaps.....save me? every relative died, then WHO? I didn't want to open my eyes hastily so that my surprise won't be limited Perhaps, its a knight in shinning armor, coming to save the damsel in her worst moment. And he was indeed a knight...... the familiar smell.....i sniffed it in and opened my eyes gently "sword lord?....." i called out his name unconsciously at that moment, my consciousness was already fading away but how can i not recognize him? He was the strange lord, who taught me swordsmanship years ago when i was on an adventure "Marry me! and i would save you, and avenge your family's untimely death, this is your last chance to live....princess arya!" the sword lord said straight forwardly and i frowned..... ~~ This story is gonna be a short romance story curious about what Arya's decision was? then read the story! Sword lord was an identified man who slaughtered humans and demons alive right in from of Arya in her last meeting with him so is it really safe to choose to be with the demon or just die?

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Kirito_Kirigaia
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This is a unique fan fiction no reincarnation or transmigration just regular old Naruto uzumaki with a system it's brilliant.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
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It's alright, formatting could use some work, but overall it's technically sound enough otherwise. I do feel the overall flow of the story could use some work, it feels a lot like a bunch of random scenes together and by the time you reach the moment of graduation, you haven't really felt anything for the mc yet because its all a bit impersonal. The world itself isn't really elaborated upon either no real world building to be found so that's something that could be improved upon too. Thus far that is a summary of the technical stuff wn names that I rated the story on. As for my opinion: At graduation he has all the usual op stuff already through gatcha rolls, so that kinda kills the excitement of combat scenes for me. The earlier collection of semi bland scenes and impersonalness make it hard to like the mc or care about anyone else in the story. Thus it failed to hook me in and resulted in my dropping it. The concept is cool enough but story wise. He's already at a level that that makes combat uninteresting and too emotionally undefined to make this a slice of life, romance or friendship novel worth reading. The same. On the world building front for adventure...

DemonGodLirux
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havent read yet, just want to know if there will be any romance?

Ignox_Xongi
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