My Muscle System in the Mage World

Hello this book is the combination of action/magic/reincarnation. Nothing much to say here if You have Any question ask away

A must read book, as the story unfold , you'll find Mc navigating the treacherous path with his even more treacherous ways.

I was sceptical at first when reading the first chapters, and i found some of the story quite lacking, but it got a lot better later in the story. So accept some lower quality with the knowledge of it getting a lot better. I would recommebd this book, the only thing lacking is that it only releases 3 chapters per. Week. That is also why i write this review despite not doing so usually, because i want more chapters👀 Read it.

Amazing novel, I truly have never seen such a wonderful story. I need more chapters, I don't think I can survive without reading more!!

Honestly the writings not bad but the story it's self is just boring I never understood why people write stories about rencarnators in a child's body it's just wierd and gets annoying quick. I would understand if it was for a little bit but this is not

The title is really funny🫵. And story seemed to be interesting . More chapters author! So I can read more.

I like the story and the concept up to the current 25 chapters. But sadly it seems like there is no proofreading or checking being done since most of my cons are about the grammar, pronouns etc...I would love for the grammar to improve and see where the story goes.

please improve your writing quality and erase meaningless talks and focus on the plot (If you have any ) related to the story . main character is cool and intelligent but Aurelius don't focus on pointless characters which will not appear later and please work on update stability the novel have huge potential it's just have dull edges which needs a little sharpening to create a masterpiece.

Can't really tell much in so few chapters but since it's Aurelius, I'm sure it's gonna be another banger

how are you going to name your novel on "muscles" and have your mc be 6'1 at only 70 kgs ,that's skinny af for a tall guy , disappointing.

passable. it lacks that spark that makes a book good but doesn't really have any of the typical deficiencies. i was waiting for this to capture me but it didn't which is a bummer. ultimately idk it's your call

author didn't you say no romance in the story

160lbs at 6’1” tall means the MC is a literally twig with ZERO muscle… he should be at LEAST 190lbs to qualify as having “muscles” cause even being 190lbs means it’s all lean muscle.

Murder is bad, but EVERYBODY, EVERYWHERE, ALL THE TIME, ALL AT ONCE be murdering. Also he is still a mage, just more battlemage than ranged traditional caster wizard.

Anyone who thinks this book deserves less than five star rating should burn. . opps The author has careful crafted every character with their unique personality. Mc is definitely not annoying "thank God" I'm not one to judge grammar cos I don't know much about it but I don't see mistakes. If you read it, then go ahead and read this book, and thank me later.

I will read soon, but its Aure, so 5 stars, WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS LOVE?????? OH BABY DON'T HURT ME, DON'T HURT ME, NO MOREEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The book offers a compelling blend of strategic depth and moral complexity, reminiscent of *Paragon of Sin*'s cultivation-driven power struggles, while weaving in the ruthless pragmatism and ideological intrigue characteristic of *Reverend Insanity*. The world-building shows impressive depth, with a richly detailed magic system and sociopolitical dynamics that hint at vast, unexplored lore. However, the pacing falters slightly in the early chapters: the prolonged village arc, while effective in establishing the protagonist’s roots and motivations, could have been trimmed to allow smoother integration of the broader world. The sudden introduction of the outside world mere chapters before Aur’s departure feels abrupt, leaving readers craving more gradual immersion into the story’s larger conflicts and factions. While the narrative’s ambition is commendable, technical issues like inconsistent grammar—repeated misuse of plurals, tense shifts, and awkward phrasing—occasionally disrupt the flow. A thorough edit would elevate the polish of an otherwise engaging tale.

Uhh I have no attachment to the mc so far Cus it feels like most of the chapters follow the side chars we will see later but writing quality and all is good though just a boring story wise

When I started reading this novel, I seemed a little boring to me. But when I kept reading it, I got to like it even more. Although I'm an author myself, I kinda like this story more. I'm learning from you so do well to teach me more

This is actually a pretty decent read. I had always avoided this book because I typically prefer stories with magic-wielding protagonists. However, when someone described the main character as a “close-combat mage,” I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, I can’t give it 5 stars. Without spoiling too much, as the story progresses, the main character stops advancing on the wizard path. It almost feels like the author went out of their way to force this to happen—perhaps to avoid the story becoming too much like a typical mage tale. I’m not sure, but either way, I decided to drop it immediately.