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My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion

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Gods and demons are everywhere in the Grand Desolate World. Jiang Lan finally becomes a disciple of Kunlun Mountain; specifically—the only disciple of the Ninth Summit. Knowing the dangers outside, he decides to stay hidden in the Ninth Summit’s Netherworld Cave and cultivate in seclusion. With a unique sign-in system unknown to everyone else, Jiang Lan acquires several divine powers, Dharma treasures, and other aids to enhance his cultivation along the way. His current goal is to keep his actual cultivation level a secret, remain a low-key Kunlun disciple and stay out of harm’s way until he is strong enough to take on any obstacles. Only when he emerges from his cultivation after some time does his Master bring him an important message: Kunlun has found him a fiancée.

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Chapter 1Registering at Kunlun Mountain

"This is the Ninth Summit."

A middle-aged man led Jiang Lan on the mountain peak.

This was one of the nine main peaks of the Kunlun Immortal Mountain.

"From today onwards, you are a disciple here, and the only disciple of the Ninth Summit.

The environment here is not good. If you are successful in your studies and want to leave, just let me know. But if my time is up, you can't leave even if you want to. "

Jiang Lan listened to the middle-aged man's voice and nodded lightly.

It wasn't easy for him to join Kunlun Mountain, so he naturally wouldn't leave rashly.

After transmigrating for so long, he had always heard of the power of Kunlun Mountain.

This was a world of vast wilderness, where gods and demons were everywhere and immortals were gathered.

If they were not careful, they would be doomed.

It was safer for him to join Kunlun.

However, his innate potential was not too great. In the end, he was chosen by the Ninth Summit. This was a place that none of the disciples seemed to want to go.

When he arrived, he saw many people gloating.

There were even people who were betting on how long he could last here.

"There is a cave at the back of the mountain in the Ninth Summit. The cave is connected to the netherworld.

The aura of the netherworld is different from the nimbus of universe. It can be slightly harmful to ordinary people.

It is not friendly to cultivators either.

As a disciple of the Ninth Summit, you will definitely be affected by the aura.

However, persevering will help you in your cultivation.

But many people could not persist.

This is also why no disciples would come to the Ninth Summit."

The middle-aged man glanced at Jiang Lan and said,

"I, the lord of the Ninth Summit, Mo Zhengdong, will be your master from today onwards.

I will do my best to nurture you.

I hope you will stay in the Ninth Summit.

The Ninth Summit's duty is to guard the entrance to the Netherworld."

Jiang Lan was a little surprised. He knew that there were passageways connecting Kunlun to the heavenly realm, but he didn't know that there were also passageways connecting to the Netherworld.

The Netherworld was on the Ninth Summit, so the passageway to the Heaven Realm should be on the First Summit?

He wasn't sure, but since the other party had made it so clear, he wouldn't be ignorant about the ways of the world.

He immediately knelt down and kowtowed three times.

"Greetings from Disciple, Master."

His future was uncertain. Fortunately, it was not as dangerous as it was outside.

[Ding!]

Jiang Lan was stunned for a moment when he heard this sound, but he was soon overjoyed.

It was finally here. He had been waiting for so many years.

[Primordial Registration System activated.]

[At the beginning of the world, the primordial chaos was the main force. It split into multiple Great Dao that spread across the mortal world.]

[The host can register near the the Great Dao. The closer you are to the Great Dao, the better it is.]

[If you register on the Great Dao, you can sign in repeatedly. Other than the first time, what you acquire from repeated registration thereafter would be far less than the first round.]

[Approaching the source of the Great Dao requires the host to have enough physique and destiny. If the host's capability is too low, he or she will not be able to withstand the gift of the Great Dao.]

[You can sign in once a day.]

After listening to the system's introduction, Jiang Lan had an accurate understanding of the registration system.

But what were the paths of the Great Dao?

He could not see them at all.

Logically speaking, the more special a place was, the closer it should be to the Great Dao.

On the path of the Great Dao, one could be signed in permanently.

Even though it was inferior to the first time, it was most definitely still a cultivation resource.

"Kunlun Mountain is such a special place. There must be the veins of the Great Dao, right?" Jiang Lan made a decision.

Then, he chanted inwardly,

"System, I will sign in here."

This was the mountain path of the Ninth Summit, a part of Kunlun Mountain. Even if it was not the Great Dao, it was definitely close to it.

It was hard to say what would happen.

Furthermore, he did not dare to sign in on the Great Dao in his current state.

After all, it was possible to fail if one's cultivation level was not high enough.

Soon, Jiang Lan heard the system's voice.

[Ding!]

[Signed in successfully. Congratulations to the host for obtaining the gift of the Great Dao. You have obtained the movement technique, Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel.]

[Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel: One of the most rapid speeds of the vast wilderness. After mastering it, one can walk on the vast wilderness. Immortals, devils, gods, and ghosts will not be able to approach.]

The moment the system's voice ended, a book appeared in Jiang Lan's mind. The name of this book was Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel.

Moreover, he had a feeling that he could take out this book if he wanted to.

In fact, he could even assimilate it into his mind to learn this movement technique.

"Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel? I've never heard of it, but from the introduction, I can tell it's extremely powerful.

However, I'm still an ordinary person. Even if I learned it, I might not be able to use it. "

Jiang Lan was very happy to receive such a cultivation technique.

At least the signing system was real.

However, without receiving reminder from the system about the Great Dao, he probably could not sign in here again.

Of course, he did not dare to learn it immediately right now either.

Once something strange occurred, it was hard to say if they would encounter any mishaps.

He had no idea what kind of person his Master was.

One had to be wary of others.

"Get up and follow me." Mo Zhengdong did not hold any other emotions on his face.

He had taken in more than one disciple, but none of them stayed.

He had no idea how long Jiang Lan would last.

Jiang Lan followed Mo Zhengdong to a courtyard.

"This will be your residence from now on. I'll be at the top of the mountain. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me." Mo Zhengdong looked at Jiang Lan and continued,

"Find me at the top of the mountain tomorrow afternoon. I'll bring you to the entrance of the Netherworld and teach you the introductory mental cultivation."

With that, Mo Zhengdong disappeared on the spot.

Jiang Lan didn't see how he disappeared.

"This is the power of an Immortal."

It would be a lie to say that he was not envious.

If it was in the past, Jiang Lan might have felt that he was far from achieving such a level.

But it was different now. He felt that it wouldn't be long before he could reach this enviable and safe state.

Jiang Lan entered the courtyard.

He walked to the center and sat there, waiting for the sky to turn dark.

After the sky turned dark, Jiang Lan turned his attention to the book in his mind.

The four words on it seemed to contain boundless attraction, as though they held the mysteries of heaven and earth.

With the guidance of his thoughts, the book on Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel began to open.

He flipped through the book page by page. At first, it wasn't fast, but it got faster and faster.

Countless pieces of information began to flow into Jiang Lan's mind.

A loud explosion was heard.

The world in Jiang Lan's mind seemed to have exploded. Immediately afterwards, it was as if he entered an unknown world.

The sea of stars was dazzling.

He felt like he was in a boundless universe, and the world was beneath his feet.

Allowing him to walk wherever he wanted.

If one took nine steps, they could reach the ends of the earth.

Suddenly, Jiang Lan woke up.

He looked at his own body and had a feeling that even an ordinary cultivator would not be able to touch him if he ran now.

"And this is when I have yet to begin cultivation. If I did, how exaggerated would this Nine Steps of Heavenly Travel technique be?"

"As long as I can achieve phenomenal success, I won't have to worry about traveling the vast wilderness."

"It's my first time signing in and I already acquired something like this. What if I continued?"

Jiang Lan was eager to try.

He was waiting for the next day.

But this time, he had to sign in at a better place.

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TribeOfOne
TribeOfOneLv6

This review is after reading the first 50 chapters during the trial period. All I can say is - this novel is extremely boring. First off, let me state that I'm not a big fan of Sign In novels. I've always found them to be a really boring type of system, copied from some of the worst free-to-play games. However, I went into this novel with an open mind, willing to give it a chance. The main problem with this novel isn't the Sign In system, but just that it's so incredibly boring. It's written more like a documentary about the life of an immortal, rather than a story of the events around the hero. The author has no sense of how to create tension or suspense in any scene. The MC is an almost emotionless doll that never reacts to anything around him, he's always lost in his own world. Even on the rare occasions that he gets into a fight, he has an utterly deadpan personality, and it feels like I'm seeing the author write about a walking piece of tofu rather than a human being. The fight scenes aren't completely worthless, as the MC uses a silly fighting style similar to One Punch Man, where he kills everything with a single punch, but even that just feels boring because there's no strategy to the fights. The fights get over before they've even begun, and most of the time the MC doesn't even know why the fight happened in the first place, because he's such a boring blob of tofu that he doesn't care to find out. Another serious problem with this novel is how it tries to badly ramp up the drama through scenes where the MC does an "amazing" task in front of other disciples of his sect. The problem is that the author has no idea what's actually impressive to look at through the eyes of a reader. For example, he spends several chapters talking about how "the MC dared to take one more step" in order to obtain treasures or walk on a lake, all while a crowd of background characters keeps shouting out how absolutely amazing it is that the MC can keep taking that step. It feels very artificial and forced, to the point that I want to puke just thinking about it. On the positive side, because the MC is so utterly bland, some of the side characters appear more relatable. There's a female character, a senior sister, who's actually wiling to listen to the MC's advice and words, and there's a senior brother who takes him seriously and accepts him as a rival on the path of cultivation. The problem is just that they're still incredibly shallow, up to the point I've seen. Rather than have independent personalities of their own, they feel like they were specially constructed characters created just to make the MC look better. The story tries to show us that even for a genius MC, it still takes hundreds of years to walk down the path of immortal cuktivation. While that's a nice mindset to have, the problem is when there's nothing at all happening during all those hundreds of years. TL DR : It's a boring story about an unexpressive MC doing nothing but cultivating for hundreds of years.

LostEra
LostEraLv15

after having read all the normal chapters, and most of the epilogue, I must say this is one of the most satisfying novels I have read on the platform so far. And the main reason for that is that it is well written. The story is well planned out and everything that happens in the story happens for a reason, and at the end it all comes together. The story is about a guy with a sign in system who becomes the only disciple of the 9th peak of the Kunlun sect. The sign in system allows him to get high quality resources appropriate for his level if he signs in at a place with dao accumilation. Although his body is not very suited for cultivation his mindset is, and coupled with the sign in resources he cultivates faster than anyone else (and despite this he needs several 100 years to become an immortal). He keeps his true cultivation hidden from everyone and avoids conflict as much as possible but when he needs to fight he is very overpowered. Not all people will like the mc though, I think some would find him boring, but having said that just know that even the boring personality is part of the plot. But I found the boring, always cultivating, personality was not really a problem bc it was also part of a good solution to something that I find a bit strange with most xianxia novels, when you think a bit deeper about the sort of life an immortal cultivator has than a lot of things should happen on a far wider timescale than in most novels. A cultivator needs a lot of time to cultivate and the amount of times they go out can be measured in years, maybe even decades but most mc's rush towards the higher cultivation levels in a couple of years and rarely do they take a long cultivation break that lasts years. And the stupid thing is that even though the mc has a system there fewer moments that the mc had plot armor or that something illogical happened than with the mc's who always get into a fight wvery city they visit. Now this mc takes it a bit to the extreme with long cultivation sessions, but that cultivation takes time is not overlooked. And in the same line of thinking the relationship he builds up with the love interest, builds up over years. They meet after he has been in the sect for a couple of years, they get betrothed after 150 years, marries after 600 years, etc. It was very satisfying to see an author implement some of the things I thought about when I read other novels. The only minor negative is that the story could have had a bit more action if the mc was forced to participate a bit more in going outside the sect, that could have added a couple 100 chapters. But since the reasoning behind this choice is explained and is part of the plot I don't mind it at all (not sure if such an mc, even with a similar good reason, would work in other stories. I think the author and translator did a good job of keeping the story interesting but I can understand not everyone thinks the same)

TheUnsuspicious
TheUnsuspiciousLv3

ive read to chap 154 this is a sign in system story. meaning that the MC will focus more on cultivating that takes like decades before coming out to gain some insight before going into retreat again. action do exist but is it's very little at the beginning. although at the later time, it does increases but it is still quite minimal. MC is told to have great temperament. meaning that he wont panic or show great emotion when facing any situation. and yes, thats what how he acts at the story. he wont help anyone if it endangers himself or risky. he is not a good person nor a bad person. he is a lawful neutral person. only when it involved his master would he begin to show such emotion. characters are great and theres a lot of untap potential for future plots. world background are not explained unless needed. the romance is great though. this is still a xianxia novel but the romance is quite pure, unlike the usual xianxia where they meet, face some danger together, fall in love, and then become couple. they actually *spoiler* get engage before falling in love. and right now they dont like each other, but have a favourable impression towarss each other. and because it is such a pure interaction where they slowly get close together. i can only honestly say that you should read this for the romance. the other aspects is fine and depending on preference, it can be good or bad. so before you start reading, please know that : 1. MC is a lawful neutral and wont help unless he have a good reason 2. theres not much action as expected from a sign in system genre 3. romance is a slow growing type

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