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My Gaia System

作者: naffan
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What is My Gaia System

WebNovel で公開されている、naffan の作者が書いた My Gaia System の小説を読んでください。[WPC #290 Entry!]The apocalypse came, and war ensued.Terran, a boy who lost his memories, is stuck wandering the endless remains of his dying world. Not even death can allow him to escape his prison c...

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[WPC #290 Entry!] The apocalypse came, and war ensued. Terran, a boy who lost his memories, is stuck wandering the endless remains of his dying world. Not even death can allow him to escape his prison called life. However, things can only remain static for so long. Everything changes when Terran is thrown into what remains of humanity. Mentally unstable, his one-way path, brimming with carnage, will start to unfold as he unravels his past while paving the road toward his future! PS- I do not own the original artwork for the cover. If you made it and want it taken down lmk. I will do so immediately.

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Purchased As The Young Master's Pet

"Isn't a Pet means someone that would take care of Young Master with all her life and soul?" She inquired with a trembling voice. Alexander arched his eyes at her, unable to believe he had brought a total introvert as a Pet. He began to approach her slowly, and she was taking each step backwards, "Pets do more of such, many dirty things," he remarked with a gory sneer, making her heart race with horror. Even though she doesn't understand what he said, "What do you mean, Young Master? I can also clean a lot....., “Pets supposed to satisfy their owners' desires, particularly sex. In summary, you are my Pet, not my personal maid. Your responsibility is to behave in accordance with what I desire; failure will result in your last breath on earth," Alexander announced, and her back finally hit the wall. Despite the fact that she was an introvert, she understood his comments meant something very dangerous! "But right now, I don't need it; I want to taste your lips instead. I want to change that saint part of you into a total sinner," Alexander murmured quietly, causing a tear to fall from her eyes. Alexander was not concerned; instead, he closed the distance between them and raised her chin, making her face meet his crimson face, "Your tears mean nothing to me, Pet," ______ Inara, a human girl who was sold by her aunt as a Pet on the Black Market. Unfortunately, she was purchased by the vicious Young Master. Alexander, the Young Master of the Duke Empire, required a Pet to satiate his demonic dark desires. But, understanding he had brought a complete introvert, his desire to taunt her purity turned into lust. Will she be able to satisfy him or stick to her introverted personality?

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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Patricia_Levy
Patricia_LevyLv11Patricia_Levy

This is well written and very creative. Already, I am predicting the future and pondering the past. I already have the need to reach through and grab the boy to bring him to a better place, to give him something he obviously doesn’ remember. I can’t wait to read more.t

Gladstone_
Gladstone_Lv13Gladstone_

This novel is good,the grammar is perfect with no error The story flows very well,from how he tried to survive and to how he got the system The setting is also very good,The author definitely did a good job

Daoistbips
DaoistbipsLv3Daoistbips

My Gaia System was fast-paced, engaging and suspenseful. It has all the elements a book should have such as suspense, action and a tinge of comedy ( dark in this case ).  At the end of the last chapter, Ive grown to like the characters especially Terran. He was a unique disturbed creepy MC I never thought I would like. I would recommend My Gaia System to anyone. Read My Gaia System! I promise, you’ll be hooked.

aigotcha
aigotchaLv3aigotcha

Here’s my Comprehensive Review(I use /10 but since you can’t rate like that, I’ll be rounding up) Writing Quality- 9.5, basically a 10 Updating Stability- The author told me he has a decently large stockpile, so we can expect daily updates minimum. 10/10 Story Development- Although it’s very early on in the story, the pacing is really good, and it felt smooth imo so 7.8-8.2/10 Character Design- Sophie hasn’t really been expanded upon YET(due to the lack of chapters out currently), but the MC is pretty good, and feels like a person so 7.3/10(4/5 in WN rating) World Background- nothing yet, I usually just give a default of 8 if it’s too early on in the story, BUT it seems interesting so far, and there’s a possibility of it being based on (partly)Greek Mythology, which could be really interesting.

The_little_boy
The_little_boyLv3The_little_boy

The novel is a good one. Its simple with appropriate pausing and speeding. The main character is just as amazing, with his special way of thinking about life. I think the author should improve on his world description though. I think a more vivid description about the world will do even though the novel is just starting. It can be a hidden gem. Good work.

DaoistvODbDR
DaoistvODbDRLv4DaoistvODbDR

This is definitely a good novel, perfect grammar, the characters are well immersed in the story, the story is flowing and well thought plot. I recommend this to anyone who reads my review.

Hassy_101
Hassy_101Lv14Hassy_101

Haven't read a book so calmly for a long while. I don't know, but I felt calm while reading it. I go give it to your English. It's excellent. The emotions and relations were well shown. In every chapter, I couldn't wait to know what happened that got in into such a place. Nice book you got there author. I highly recommend.

Lu_Shui
Lu_ShuiLv14Lu_Shui

Wonderful survival story! It is great to see that the MC is slowly crawling up from what remains from the apocalypse. Good to see that he gets well-deserved help! Five stars definitely, well-written and I find no grammatical mistakes 🙂 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

PEARL_WANG
PEARL_WANGLv11PEARL_WANG

Well written worth reading this system building novel. I can feel the patience and clarity in this work, which is hard to find these days. I really appreciate and highly recommend your work.

naffan
naffan作者naffan

Hi, Author here shamelessly leaving 5-stars. ^_^ This is my WPC #290 system entry. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated! Thank you for reading!

RobynCardona
RobynCardonaLv10RobynCardona

Really strong start! I love the good writing, you can easily picture the world in your mind. Has a bit of a Hokuto no Ken vibe, which I like. Keep up the good work!

Hopkins
HopkinsLv12Hopkins

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ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14ThePotatoKing

Love the story so far. Has great potential. I really like the start. The author is really good at describing the emotions of the main character and you can actually feel his pain and loneliness. So far the system seems to be going in an interesting direction and the world seems interesting enough! I have high hopes

Theomancy
TheomancyLv2Theomancy

Everything about this Novel is wonderful. The mc is well flushed out and is relatable to the reader. The world building is wonderfully set up and easy for the reader to understand. Overall I expect great things and I will be watching for chapter updates.

YSP_PW
YSP_PWLv2YSP_PW

Superb writing skills, like the wording and i smell romance in the last updated chapter....I am waiting for the update soon. though it's all great. I would seek some between paras. Please make something out of Sophie and him....please

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