MARVEL CELESTIAL

a guy reincarnates him as an all-powerful cosmic being You already know how this is going, the typical protagonist without a purpose since he can do everything

guy is even good grammar and such, the beginning I liked, more after the chat group, changes the name and such and the female characters he calls them wives of nothing '-', doing what is harem and quite cliche. well it looks like a wish fulfillment fanfic

It's a big trash 🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮 🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮🚮

begening good but after mcbecome marvel strongest its become trash mc personally trash he just call girls his wife from the first meeting stupid and worried about justice league and scared to change the plot becuz miles lol trash cowrd mc for me not good this a trash

This fanfic is just bad in so many different ways

Okay, the concept is good but the execution is bad, the protagonist have a blank personality, and he has no focused objective, having just small jobs in each new universe with no endgoal in mind, then there is the writting, it is bad.

"With a SYSTEM" story.

Bro atleast ise chatgpt to fix grammar...

Writing quality is much left to be desired, lot of mistakes either in spelling or -ed or -ing. Story is mediocre and cliché, there is the mc that in the first chapters gets powers and skills that are simply unnecessary. The mc seems blank and dull. The story is somewhat fast paced. The only good about is the idea mc being a celestial ( I don't see those much around ) and that it's in marvel universe but again the writing and the pace of the story makes it dull and boring.

Amazing. Beautiful. Great. Wow. Spectacular. Immaculate. Pristine. Awesome. Never before seen. One of a kind. Something else. Mind blown. Game changing. A must read.

The story got no depth, characters got no depth. Everything is boring cuz they all got item handed to them. The girls exists merely for mc to use and is just a shell of their original character. Mc acting like some dense protagonist for no reason despite being a God.

mc gets 5 wishes proceeds to wish for 10 things 🫤

Good Job...keep updating ...I Hope u don't Drop

Hello keep up the good work i like the story very much i'll be looking forward for more chapters[img=update]

I dont care what otherse say its good enough for me 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

it be 5.0 I'm hope he gets the other forces and will there be a harem since it looking so far like one will there be TV show characters in the chat group?

For me the story actually good. Its's not that bad like other people say. You should give it a try.

Just reading the wishes, I can see this just the same.Bad horrible storyline... it's just bad. There are multiple wishes in one wish that which is don't really make sense and thier very cliché. There's a lot of easy ways to make him overpowered. Here's how to do it in two wishes. 1. Is true immortality. That means his soul, mind, and body are all immortal. 2. The True Prodigy of all. That means his talent in all fields is unending. Meaning energy manipulation of any kind and study of any knowledge and practice of that knowledge. You wanna go further. Wish 3. True perfect adaptation and evolution. Upgrade any energy you find to COSMIC force of some kind and untill you have your own singular Cosmic force that you own. Your body becomes a divine instrument or weapon. All energy becomes unable to harm you, etc, etc. Its easy to be overpowered and not have so many wasted wishes. or unended abilities.

i like the story, keep improving [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]