Mana: Goddess Of Destiny (HIATUS)

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It’s very creative writing and you can definitely tell where the author connects the worlds! The only thing I wish is that the author rereads the story and fix the ‘small’ mistakes. Sometimes it’ll get you confuse but’s it worth the Adventure!

This novel starts with a nice synopsis that leads the believer to think that they will experience the journey of a goddess who has ascended from being a mortal, but it soon turns out as a lackluster average novel with a concept that has already been exploited countless times. Mana experiences worlds to pass away the time and to try to regain her emotions, but multiple occasions in the book show that she adopts the mindset of a typical 'villaness protagonist' instead of a lost and emotionless character. The story development only accentuates the problem as the novel provides few to no details on almost every event rhat occurs, instead opting to throw in a few details as an afterthought. The numerous spelling and grammar errors don't help either as they highlight the how each chapter isn't checked. The errors, although far from unreadable, still deteriorate the quality of the novel as a whole and takes away from the reader's experience. This novel is only getting a 3 in updates because I haven't bothered checking how consistent the updates are, but it is on hiatus which can't be a good thing. The novel as a whole can only be considered as graded with a C(75/100) if graded optimistically, and is definitely something that readers should skip reading.

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Good Book but can't help to Say that the des chapter after the 12 are pointless if tout have read common sense of a duke daughter beacause the story is exactly the same exept rushed

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