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My life will Never Change from the ‘Hell’ is it. Even Pain had become a Dull passing thing. I am a coward. I am Such a Coward that no matter how many times I try to take my own life, I couldn’t. That’s Why I was so happy when she pushed me into the oncoming traffic. Because surely in death, I will find Peace And Yet……Why? *Disclaimer- Parts of this novel Revolve around the Worlds and Characters of Other Written Works of Literature like Animes, Games, Books, Etc. As such said Works belong to their perspective publishers and creators. Other Books I also Publish this Series Under Both these Platforms, with webnovel being my primary focus of publishing. So if you wish to see more chapters of any of my series then Webnovel is the place. Anywhere else well, that’s on you. Webnovel: Mana: Prophet of Chaos: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15942197805474405 Mana: Goddess of Destiny: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12467253605522305 Mana: Before the Rise: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13840483506653505 Webnovel also supplies and invite Code and Special Link. Here are Mine! Please Support. Invite Code: dyhYa7yC Special Link: https://acts.webnovel.com/2019/63659293/index.html?inviteCode=dyhYa7yC Wattpad Mana: Prophet of Chaos: https://www.wattpad.com/story/211974177-mana-prophet-of-chaos Mana: Goddess of Destiny: https://www.wattpad.com/story/199186161-mana-goddess-of-destiny Mana: Before the Rise: https://www.wattpad.com/story/204855513-mana-before-the-rise

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Evaluation Report: Not A Waste!

➤ Story Evaluations

World: Not a Waste

Task: Evaluate the New Story

Genre: Female-Protagonist

Difficulty: ★★★

Synopsis: She died once and worked hard in her second life. Now, her third life she plans to change things

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The story is relatively peaceful, the romance does not begin until later. But a story doesn't need romance to be good. It seems that what was happening here was the female lead uplifting tale after trials of hardship.

It must be said that the title of this story 'Not a Waste!' was actually, the female lead's biography she writes when she is around her thirties. The words themselves where often said to her as she grew up from on.

Her parents were not pleasant, and the foster care system was hard for her along the life she led in her second life. If one did not know that the main character was a rebirthed, the story would have been solid and well-balanced.

Most tales of rebirth have many taking advantage of the future. The female leads in this case did not use these elements but instead proceeded with hard work and kindness. The side characters such as her sister's and her aunt, where instead given the roles of encouragers while having their own individual lives.

As for conflicts, you could say they where only the everyday hinders, as well as, entitled people by even they ever just passerby's in this way of life. The female lead did not go out of her way to make anyone's life miserable. She did not have any enemies, and drama was light and would only make you angry one second but make you laugh or feel warm by the next page.

The realistic nature of this world would be given five stars if not for the rebirth element. Because in truth life is just as is. LIFE

And it passably quickly, sometimes with good things happening and other times with bad.

Evaluation Points:

Story: ★★★★

Characters: ★★★★

Setting: ★★★★

Plot: ★★★

Rating: ★★★★

Ending Comments: Not much is needed to be said about this world, the story is best described in experience.