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Lost piece

作者: Daylee
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概要

the female protagonist had lost her childhood best friend and her first love... as in the tragic end when she was unable to let go the past memories... someone entered in her life.... helping to make her move on... he didn't knew when he fall for her.... ... ... but she was as cold as ice.... it was very hard to melt the layers of her heart.... .... ...... will he be able to make her love again... and help her found her lost Heart.... ..... ... ... ... ... .. ... as mentioned... in my thoughts.... this story's plot was inspired by my true life's surrounding circumstances... but it has nothing to do with reality..... the story is purely fictional and characters are imaginary... ... .. as a new writer kindly review my work and also rate me.... help me in improving my writing.. so that I can give you all better works... thank you ?

Chapter 1The lost rain (1)

There were dark clouds in sky... TVs and Radios were buzzing about the heavy monsoon coming at any time....

Everyone was gazing at the sky... fearing from the arrival of the rain that had already nearly drowned the nearby states ...

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A young girl was walking on the road holding a bouquet of white flowers.... She seemed to be quite stressed and was not affected by the growling and threatening sound of the sky...

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At certain distance people were gathered in the house. A ritual ceremony was helding there..

From the commotion inside... it can be said it was someone's death anniversary...

everyone was geatherd all around a photo kept in the mid hall covered with white flowers and incense sticks...

The picture was of young boy who seemed to be around in his late teen's..

People were whispering,..."what a good boy he was... so obedient.. so honest... "

" yes it was really a great loss to loss the only son.... "

"it was so unexpected he would be diagnosed by cancer and what's above..... a blood cancer "

" I heard that the family and boy know all about it.... and it was not sudden he was suffering from the age 3..... they hide it... only few knew about it.. "

"hey, hey quiet... family is coming....

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A mid age man in 40s came along with a lady maybe his wife.... they both seemed to be quite disturbed.... their face was pale and tears seemed to be dry on the cheeks....

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They processed the ceremony.... and then the door was again opened... same girl that was walking on street came inside and placed the bouquet in front of the photo.....

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she was looking shaggered and it can be seen clearly on her face that there was storm in her little heart..

she sat there....silently and held her head down..... tears started falling from her eyes and as soon tears rolled down her cheeks.....

with a loud thunder.... monsoon came... it was pouring cats and dogs outside...

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people were whispering... they don't know about the relation of this girl... and the deceased family....

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.they were assuming... many things... even the close relatives don't know.....

at that after the ceremony... that middle aged man came forward and announced, " it's very hard to announce that my son... the only caretaker of my business was deceased one yr back at this day..... it's his death anniversary and I invited you all to attend this...

yes there is some other reason to do so...

as you all know that I had only one son and now as he is no more between us...

*tears rolled down his eyes *.....it was quite disheartening for him to talk this in the ceremony but to ease the house war.... he had to do so..... after stabling his emotions..... he said again in shaking voice. ....

" as he is no more with us..... I officially announce my whole business will be given to my only daughter..... ishi..... and until she reached the age of maturity that is 20 she will be guided and protected by her .... .... .....brother's childhood friend and the most trusted ally.... daughter of the elite lawyer and the manager of the P. P. S group..... miss naira...... "

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soon everyone 's eyes turned to the girl who was sitting there.. keeping her head down.... suddenly she stood and walked towards the man.... she who was looking so fragile and young.... as a new flower who's is just bloomed... now looks like a strong and determined girl who can easily conquer the world with just one word...

looking straight in the eyes of everyone.... she looked towards man and slightly bowed in order to show respect and said,.... " thank you Mr. Sen for acknowledging me for something so important.... I will never let you down... it was sudden yet I accept this honour....

now pls continue with the ceremony and I want to excuse myself....

thanks to all... "

saying this she bowed front and then in front of the pic she again bowed... whispered something and moved towards the man whom she addressed Mr. sen and quietly leave the area...

Everyone was shocked with sudden exchange of the words... they were still digesting all this..... but seeing the young girl going out the house in such a heavy rain they were standing there like..... they had seen in Medusa's eyes.....turning into stones...

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yet they all managed to bring themselves back to ceremony.... yet everyone has same questions floating in their mind.....

" who was this girl.......

....is she really the mysterious manager of pps group about whom no one knew....

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and what's her relationship with this boy .....

is she really only his friend..... or somet is behind the scenes....

and above all this..... her sudden appearance and disappearance from the ceremony....

and is she even not little bit terrified with that deadly rain outside.....

and wait.... they didn't listen any car's voice... don't tell she is going to walk on the road in this dead rain alone and by herself....

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Just who is she really....

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