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While on a mission for his Empire our Protagonist Adam gets Spirited Away without warning. He Finds himself on a Planet that is completely hostile to him, while he has no equipment whatsoever and Incompetent System in his Head that is nothing more then a broken Program at the beginning. Why he is there? How is he still alive? It just escapes his Logic. Take a look how our lone Hero manages to Survive? !!! Minor spoilers and clarification !!! Turned into a practically Immortal beeing called 'Tén', who are the remains of a Dead Star. 'Tén' are able to survive anything as long it has energy to sustain Themselves. Adam, now one of thouse beeings, needs to adapt and find out what to do on a Earth a few Million years after its Birth. In a time we call the 'Hadean Eon' and what does he do since hes to stubborn to off himself of or take an oath to a Demon to get him away off this Hellhole of a Planet. How dose he deal with his situation and Boredom? Word of the Writer: I write this story as an test of my creativ writing. I have no plans for the future of this Story but still have some idear brewing. I'll also keep my research minimal to not bum myself out too early and who knows? maybe my World has a different How far can a bit of amatur writing, from a dyslexic, with English as his second language bring me? And lastly to all thouse people who have a stickler for gramma here: Please find as many Errors as possible! Keep yourself entertained and make Jokes on behalf on my writing. If i find the energy i'll rewrite the Text in the future. Or i grow so bored of writing and this Story gets forgotten and covered in Dust. Ps. I just entered this competition at random. We will see if it even gets to a 100.000 words so it cap pertipate. Most likely not! How the heck can somebody write this much!?! I mean i can bs a lot but that much???

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Don't Tickle a Dragon

Many milleniar prier Adam awoke a other Tén was going through an Uninhabited Starsystem. In its possession where a couple of Tén Shards. Without a will they where nothing more free energy drifting around in Space.

The Tén, inheriting its Will from a great beeing outside of this very young Universe, took the form of a Wheale like Reptiles with a extended neck and Six Legs. Its Body was bearly over a Mile long was covered in Scales as big as Hippos and Sprouted two Pair of Leathery wings that used a Plasma to propell itself through the Void between thouse planets.

It's Mind held the frame of an Soul library for its future kin. Though most of Personal memory was lost it held the knowledge of its previous incarnation that found this Universes when it was Born. But right now it needed to build up the magic network to start the Biomancy project for the birth of the first of its kind in this Universe. Thought it had Time.

As it glided through Space, refuleing its energy in the Glow of the Yellow sun in the Goldilock zone of this system it noticed a Shadow stopping it's fule intake. Looking behind itself it was shocking to see a rouge planetoid being thrown at it without its notice.

In panic it tryed to make Hard turn in empty space only managed but only by throwing away its luggage with a sufficient Counterforce. Saving a lot of Energy by Protecting its form.

The Tén looked around in caution. In its mind it would never overlooked that small moon sized object on its flight path. Something threw it at it. And it intuition was true! The tén saw a Group of Elements looking at it like a big pice of meat. Not knowing that the beeing that they provoked, thougth unassuming in form, was a beast far greater in might then they could imagine.

The Tén agrovated looked at thouse fools. Had they minded thier own business and not tryed to rob it from its cargo they would be left alone. It remembered that those Elementals where the probably the Natives of this Universe but that didn't allow them to underestimate it. And for that they would pay.

And so it came to be that with a roar that pierced the void. The Tén Declared that all elements in this system would be mad to an example. Starting a Genocide that would Wipe out over 98% of Elements in this System.

And in its hunt fuled in prideful Fury forgot its Cargo still drifting trough space, closely followed by the moon sized rock that orbited the Sun since its creation of this solar system. on a Collision course to a Planet that would have been a world of Dead rock if nothing happen in the future.

But for the luck or unluck of the Planet it would obtain a chance of Life by nearly being ripped apart by the Moon that the elements Threw. Awakening the will of the plant through Pain of being ripped apart. Trying to Stay together by survival instinct. For the will, in a silent cry of pain, birthing the want to survive capturing the rocks and fragments in its orbit and trying to stich itself together after the impact.

Its learned what helped and what hurt more and began to reconstruction of itself and the formation of a proper core for better use of its Energy. Forcing Development to stay alive. While the rest of the Solar system was to busy with a monster that hunted down the Elements.

In the Process, by sheer coincidence the now aktiv Planet absorbed a couple of the Tén Shards, boosting its capability into a ralm of a miracle and none Noticed because of the Rampage. Initially wanting to heal itself and go back into dormant sleep the young planet witnessed the whole rampage. And not wanting to be on the hitlist of that Beast started to distroy its elements. It convinced itself that since thouse Elements provoked that Powerful beeing that they where the Pest. It remembered that they where responsible for its own near Death.

And it watched as the elementals, that where wiped out, Starting to flee this system in great numbers. In the meantime it witnessed how the Stars in the sky changed. It saw how Nebulas of Hydrogen and Helium turned into new Stars in the distance birthed new Stars and how other stars died exploding into all sort of elements. And how other Yonger stars captured thouse Elements and form system like its own. Like being arranged by an invisible Hand.

As the Milleniar go by the Planet healed, beeing reformed better then ever. The Planet used up a lot of the Shards energy. Wich it formed then into a core. It knew that the Beast it doubed something akin to 'Dragon' in its Mind, was nearly done in its cleansing of the System. And it probably wanted thouse Shards back. What the Planet didn't forsaw was that the new form Core spouted a body and Started to walk around on itself. It was so Tiny in comparison to the 'Dragon'.

And as soon as the Dragon was down at flew down to the planet it started to look for the shards and the planet. The planet, now had two beeing on it and it was amusing to see how the once Killermaschine now looked for its Luggage it lost milleniar ago. While its luggage what happy about evey little oddity the Planet layed it along its way to find out how it worked. It's Nature unlike any Elemental it once saw.

And it was amusing to see how the littel being jumped in Joy as it gathered up wired pices of Carbon chains that form by mixing up stuff. And it relised that it was maybe not the time for slumber now. Thought the wounds where patched and Healing it would be a shame to miss such amusing things on it own crust. And it giggleed like the little being when it found the Gold.