Login Before Others: Stone Age

Bruh that game sounded perfect, are aliens the only hope left of having good games? ;-;

ネタバレコメントを表示

RAWS PLEASE ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I look forward to this book I will definitely read it. hopefully it will get selected or released soon so I can read it. Don't stop trying to write this one it seem very good.

With those numbers he can throw down a seed of a giant oak and it will mature and die in days not to mention regular plants, why do they even choose these trash?

I really like things related to system , kingdom building or sect clan etc.. or go for cultivation novel .. but when there is cheat like ability which is super powerful then don't want to read it .. having advanced knowledge and acting on that to get advantage over other is good but having SSS grade ability from start don't like it 😒

raw pls ..........................................................................................................................................................

First of all, the potential of the story is not that great. This kind of plot has already been used a lot of times, but sometimes an overused plot can still be good if added with enough spice to make the story interesting, or if the spices are different, the story might be somewhat or entirely unique to its predecessors. Second, the progression of the story is too rushed, or I might say that the author is lazy enough to make a lore or a plot for the novel. Then there's the world background, and I might say that the world background of this novel is below average. Why? Because the story is too rushed, there are a lot of things in the story that aren't explained thoroughly enough for the readers to understand, and there's a sudden drop of new information with no proper background or history for the thing to stand on its own and justify the author's decision to create it in the first place. Third, the writing quality itself is somewhat average or slightly above average because the author didn't put enough love and effort into writing this novel, and loving your work is an important characteristic of a good novel. If you just write a novel as a product, the reader must also feel that. Lastly, the updating stability is good, but quality must come before quantity. In conclusion, the only downsides to this novel are the too fast story progression, the lack of effort put into putting lore in the story, and the fact that the story is not unique enough to satisfy veteran readers who have already read a ton of novels.

The synopsis has told me the entire story without even reading it. 1001001011111000101011100101001010111111000011110101001100101010101010100101010101010111111010100101111110010101101010100110101010101010101111010101111001110010010100000010100001001110111100

it's your usual 1000000000000000000000x everything novel. those type of novels will always have plot holes but it seems like majority of the people reading don't care. I always wonder why these type of novels are always the one getting picked. it's nothing new and obviously not high quality. it's as if webnovel is just recycling trash and adding a new premise and calling it a new novel.

whelp I don't need to read this one to find out what happens since the description spoils the entire novel..............................................

probably one of the most disappointing stories on here. the synopsis makes it sound fun and exciting, and there’s the whole buildup to when the aliens start merging, but the story stops literally before anything starts happening. we basically just read a prologue. translations are almost as bad as non-straight up MTL can get. pronouns rarely accurate, often mistranslated phrases that make no sense. dodge if you can.

Honestly I was reall liking the book for the first 12 chapters but after that the story became really rushed and opened up a lot of plot holes in the story. It is really sad to see that happen to a novel that intrigued me.

raw? .

anyone found yet?.......................

will it be nationalistic??????????😱😱😱😱😱😱🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Its Good, But not as i expected, Author End it Early without letting us see the fight against extraterrestrial only he show how it descended, Even Not Complete Descend only saying Human We Descend Ended, Everything is good But not as you expected Like its summary its all fake, It End Fast And His territory id only span of a small valley and flatten mountain he didnt even let us see the late game only early stage, He keep saying late stage, when the extraterrestrial invaded his force is still weak, suck suck. World character updating translation all is fine but story is extremely disappointing.

Wrong synopsis and wrong title, maybe I should say wrong content. Author Let me handle it did not handle it well. If you want to, just read the first few chapters and then the very last chapter (even the regression becomes mostly irrelevant in between) . There is no indication but I hope it has a sequel because the story has barely started despite 300+ chapters.

this is the definition of wasted potential sadly it starts out very good but then betrays itself by going from the mc havikg some tamed tiger to being the lord of a elve and goblin tribe in 2 chapters

ネタバレコメントを表示