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In the Novel World

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What is In the Novel World

WebNovel で公開されている、Dark_Sider321 の作者が書いた In the Novel World の小説を読んでください。April 1,2023A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl...

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April 1,2023 A boy can be seen in an empty class as he is looking out the window. The whole classroom is enveloped in peaceful silence but the same can’t said about the outside. A “ONCE” beautiful girl is being apprehended by the law enforcement and the people around her is giving her a disgusted look. The boy is seeing everything from the second floor of their school building. No emotion can be detected from his face apart from a calm smile. After seeing the police cars left the school premise, he quietly left the classroom. Nobody can tell from his expression that the girl who is being taken by the police is his so-called “GIRLFRIEND”. \ \ \ \ \ It is my first-time writing novel and I don’t have much experience about writing. English my third language and I am not very good at it. So, you guys will find a ton of grammatical or other mistakes. But I will try to improve my writing quality over time. It will of great help if you guys can give me your honest opinion in the comment section. I know there will a lot of criticism because of my writing quality but please keep it in check because it’s not a pleasant feeling to hear people talk crap about someone’s work even if that work isn’t good. Last but not least Enjoy my novel!

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chloelp · 若者
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telltopia · LGBT+
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UNCLE JACK THE BACHELOR

The story is about a boy called Mike who visits his uncle called Jack. Jack has not married yet he is very rich. Mike wonders why he doesn't do so. He has heard many stories about him concerning the source of his riches. He hears strange things in the house which makes him wonder whether all the things he has heard about him are true. He decided to do his own research about his uncle's wealth. He is also amazed by the level of technology at his house. When he gets used to it, he continues spying on his uncle who has a secret room and forbids entry for Mike and Jean who was his security guard. Later, Uncle Jack tells Mike that he had fired a security guard because of intruding in the room. This leaves Mike with many unanswered questions. He aspires to know more about his mysterious life. When Mike is looking for novels to read, Uncle Jack finds him close to the secret room and pleads with him to tell him whether he has gotten inside his room. Mike demands a phone and he escapes with the parcel containing the phone that he receives at the gate. His uncle pursues him. A heavy downpour disrupts Mike's journey and when he finally meets his uncle on the road, he discovers that the parcel doesn't have the phone. His uncle tells him about the phone later and pleads with him once more to tell him the truth. He is so serious about the room which leaves Mike and Jean with many questions. Later, Mike feels slight unwell from sweat and cold. He rushes outside and Uncle Jack gets hold of him. Jean comes to rescue but Mike refuses to talk when asked about the problem. When they leave him alone in the cold, he dives in the swimming pool and gets out terrified. He is worried and afraid of his uncle's whole homestead. During the next day, Mike goes back to his parents without taking breakfast. He later explains everything to them. He has already told Uncle Jack about his findings and conclusions about the source of his riches. So at home, everyone agrees with him that Uncle Jack is indeed a member of the occult. Later, Mike meets his uncle while at the river and he manages to convince him to follow him with his car. His uncle then brings news in a folded paper to Mike's parents who are angry when they see him. Mike's father reprimands him for having carried Mike and having bought them fresh water from town. As they discuss whether to read the news or not, Mike's elder brother picks the note and reads the news, which is after Uncle Jack has left. The news are about a celebration which is very important to Uncle Jack. Mike's parents are hesitant to accept the invitation, but with so much persuasion, they agree. What happens next unfolds everything about Uncle Jack's mystery life.

Samuel_Musau · 都市
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Rohan_Shinde_2731
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It has a different start from other books, which I find very interesting and very promising, and am looking forward to reading more of it.

Kw0z
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Your synopsis is pretty bad. It doesn’t really give me any info on the story, thus making readers not want to read it.

Bananalover20
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my mother language is not English so I am not so good at it....I like the fact that the author is using common words which is quite understandable.

unknowndude567
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I am a sucker for mystery and the last chapter gave me a mysterious vibe....so I guess its not so bad for a new novel.

Deternitydude
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the beginning is pretty good it's setting the personality for the mc and what to kind of expect ncc

Joseph_Gomes_1373
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I suppose the beginning isn't so horrible, and the English is more legible than in other novels. I hope to see more of you in the future.

Deciduous_B0ltling
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I’ve read till ch 26, which is the latest currently and is on hiatus cuz of author’s finals. The beginning was interesting. But after the transmigration, most things were quite similar to the Webnovel ‘No More Pain For This Villain’. My suggestion to the author: differentiate your novel from that one as much and as soon as possible (while you have changed minor plot currently along with names and appearances of characters and places, that is not enough). Also, I don’t like novels with the harem tag, but I’ll give this a shot. I’d recommend to minimise the significance of the harem to the plot or at least make it so there’s only 2-3 members of the harem and they don’t instantly fall for him for some illogical reason; make the whole thing realistic.

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Maverick_sfx
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#tragedy tag is a must in this novel, so some might not like it

Karnann
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when will you upload next chapter ? author I am waiting

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