REWORK TO MY FIRST CHAPTERS DECIDED! (to chapters 1-11)

Recently I began reading my work from the first chapters (a friend is reading it, and I'm with him whenever he does it)

And my first chapters...

They fucking suck

No, seriously, I'm wondering how the fuck did y'all stay. Thanks for trusting a completely strange saying, "Source -trust me."

Now!

I decided to rework them because I think it's for the best for a stable audience! (I'll keep uploading new chapters, don't worry)

The re-work won't change the plot; I will just add descriptions and details and enhance the text...

I was about to write 300 words about what I was going to do but better... IN DA NUTSHELL: BETTER CHAPTERS, LORE STAY THE SAME

(one of the reasons I was reluctant is the comments, there is a handful amount, and it would be a pity killing them.)

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Thank you for your understanding. I already stockpiled 1.5 chapters, so don't worry, NEW CHAPTER TOMORROW!!!

ALSO GODMANIT!

The first chapter turned out 3k words long. I'll have to cut it into pieces 1.1 1.2 1.3

It took me almost 3 hours to re-write a chapter... this will take A LOT OF time. I expected it, but not to this extent, anyway.

HAVE A GREAT DAy! or night... depending on wherever you are!

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Note3

I FINISHED!!!

Chapter 1 got re-worked

ALMOST FUCKING 3K WORDS!!!