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In Lookism as a system for Daniel Park

THIS IS MADE AFTER WATTPAD TRAUMATIZED ME. So to save and protect other people eyes. i took it in my hands to make a lookism fanfic. Without Any Lg Sh*T. The fanfic is pretty simple. A guy die. Guy meet Rob. Guy spin wheel. Guy gets To be A system. And gets the Perfect body Of Daniel park. Guy happy. Now the guy makes changes in the plot. He will show why Charles took interest in the second body. He will show what is the ture power of it. Wannna know what happens when you send a guy with as a system and gave him hack's. Read to find out. Welcome to my fanfic. Hope you will stick with me to the end of it.

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CHAPTER 20 : Final days with teacher And Bad news

Story starts here.

After everyone leaving the detention center. Big daniel is sent back to his cell. As instead of sending him back to his old cell. He is taken to a new cell, confused with the sudden change of cell he asks the guard "What is going on". receiving no response. He sees a new cell and is pushed inside by guards. Inside the cell system sees a man smoking and sitting on a chair.

As all of this is going on with big body we cut to the little body which is begin trained by james lee.

Little daniel begin tired form all training falls onto the ground breathing heavily. As then he hear james saying "28 days has passed. Daniel park I trained you with all my skills and knowledge. As how much can you learn depends on you. But don't think your ready yet. You still have a final test".

little daniel hearing this says while phanting "I will take on any test, It probably could not be worse".

After hearing this james says " you might die in the final test, After hearing this do you still want to take this test?". little daniel hearing this is shocked into silence and hearing the tone and face of james begin serious. 

He is hesitating about what to say something but then remembers a conversation with the system 'it doesn't matter what you choose in life. But sticking to the end of that choice is what it means to be a man. Even if your choice is wrong. Instead of denying of changing your decision. You stand and face the consequence even if it kills you. Remember daniel during these choices your decision is what defines you. Don't worry about what people will say or other factors. What truly matters is your choice and will you stick to that choice to the end'.

 james seeing little daniel hesitation . starts to feel disappointed. But is quickly surprised with daniel next words "I will take it. No matter even if I die. It was my decision to train with you and I will stick to the end of this choice even if I die". james seeing the fire in the eyes of little daniel.

james, feels proud. He thinks 'When was the last time he felt this emotion'. giving a smirk he says "The final test will be a fight between you and me. But in this fight I will not hold back. The fight will continue until one of us passes out or is unable to fight". little daniel hearing this nods. As then 28 days of hard training. He calls upon stats window. And is shocked with his stats.

 SYSTEM HOLDER

 DANIEL PARK

 STATS

  STRENGHT :SSS

 SPEED : SSS+

 INTELLIGENCE : EX

 ENDURANCE : SSS

 VITALITY : SSS

  PASSIVE SKILLS :

COOKING LEVEL 9 : THE PERSON WHO EATS YOUR FOOD WILL NEVER FORGET THE TASTE FOR THEIR ENTIRE LIFE.

PERFECT BODY (68%) THIS SKILL WAS OBTAINED BY USING UPGRADE TOKEN ON YOUR SELF.

SINGING LEVEL 6 : YOUR BRON FOR THIS.

(NEW) POLYGLOT : YOU KNOW RUSSAIN, CHINESE, JAPANESE, ENGLISH.

(NEW) REPAIRING LEVEL 5 : STILL FAR FORM BOB

UI: THE ART OF SLEEPING WHILE A*S KICKING (ACTIVATES UNDER CERTAIN CONDITIONS).

ACTIVE SKILLS.

BLOOD LUST : CONDITIONAL ACTIVES UNDER EXTREME EMOTIONS.

(NEW) IA LEVEL 6: INVISIBLE ATTACKS COPIED FORM JAMES LEE STILL FAR FORM JAMES LEE.

(NEW) COPIED ARTS LEVEL 7 : HIPPITY HOPPITY YOUR STYLE IS NOW MY PROPERTIY. COPIED FIGHTING STYLES FORM RANDOM PEOPLE.

NEW QUEST

FINAL TEST

JAMES LEE WANTS TO TEST YOUR LEVEL SHOW HIM. HOW MUCH YOU HAVE LEARNED IN THESE 28 DAYS.

REWARD ?????

Little daniel seeing this is shocked. thinking back to when his stats were in all F. now all these stats are in sss. He feels his hardwork has a major effect. with new found confidence he says to james lee "I will also not hold back. I will show you how much I have learned over the course of 28 days. I will not let it go to waste".

While this all happening to little daniel. We cut to big daniel sitting in the cell with a man smoking. with system saying "I expected you to come but never expected you to arrive in this way. Anyway how are you doing gun".

gun ignoring him speaks "This is where I was kept when I arrived in this center. You can say I have little memories of this cell". Looking nostalgic he continues to speak

"You can think of it as my starting point in korea. But we are not here to discuss my starting point. I saw it your masterpiece. You surpassed 16 year old gun park daniel at the age of 16. This makes me want to fight you now to see how much have you grown in here. But not now you still have to beat my to be successors. Do you think you can win".

After saying that he awaits for his response, system using big daniel body say "gun I never expected you to be a such talkative person. We both know it. I am above any of soon to be successors, Each of them might have their skills and strengths, But we both know who will win".

After hearing the response gun starts laughing out loudly. After a while of laughter gun says "your right you can win easily. This confidence and sharp mind strength and ability to pull loyal people. This makes me envious you're the perfect successor that I or anyone can ask. So let me ask you again daniel park do you want to be my successor". gun extends his offer toward big daniel.

System using big body says "I will accept it only if you tell me what happened to gen 0. why they all disbanded". hearing this gun face loses all smile.

The already dark room is getting darker As gun becomes serious and says "daniel it will be for your own good if you never ask this question again. Believe me I say this if it was someone else that would have asked this question. I would have killed him. Daniel if you agree to be my successor. I will forget that you ever asked me this question ". gun starts unknowingly release aura of a killer.

system with out backing down uses skill blood lust to match guns aura and says "what if I don't agree. Let me guess you will kill me. we both know I am not easy to kill. Even if you are successful. I assure you I will make sure your not in any condition to have a common life".

In a dark room 2 people sit in front of each other. Looking at them anyone can feel it. No they can see it 2 demons that want to kill the one in front of them. hearing him gun smiles and says "good daniel if you agreed to the deal for me forgetting the question. I would have killed you regardless of what happened to me. But forget it all. I am here with a good news and bad news. Which one would you like to hear".

Hearing this system says in a scarstic tone " I never expected for you to be the guy to deliver news. Especially good news". Ignoring his tone gun says "well the good news is you will be free in 2 days. But the bad news is hemin is dead. The doctors could not save him. He died due to the bone shards of his ribcage puncturing his heart vessels. Or that what is the cover up. Daniel he died 2 hours late. When he was sent to the hospital. But I and goo used our most contacts to keep it under rugs. The news will be announced tomorrow".

Hearing this system who was once a human is shocked. He feels like he is begin pushed. He cannot describe this feeling. But he helped little daniel using big body kill a man. with a heavy voice he says "Gun tell me this is a joke or your lying".

Without changing his face he replies " we both know I will get nothing by lying to you or joking with you. I never wanted to tell you this. Goo also agreed but we both one day this will come to light. Rather then you finding out. It would be best to tell you now. Daniel park you kill hemin the instructor at the summer camp. You have a day to process this all information. The news will be release 24 hours after I leave this room. Brace your self daniel. You accidently crossed a line. Which many could not cross in their whole life. Either It was there to protect people around you. Be prepared daniel. Next time you might need to cross it willingly".

After saying this gun is turns to leave the room, But his steps are interrupted by the response of System " gun I do not feel guilty for him. I warned him to change but he did not listen. Gun thanks for telling me the truth. But how many know about this matter". 

Without turning gun Responds "It would be best if you don't ask Daniel. Take care daniel park. Cause this night will be the night. You will always remember". Then gun leaves.

After a while of silence in the room system is left in the cell alone thinking what and where he went wrong, He was a common man before and now within months of his second chance he became a murder. He understands how the novels and fanfic which turned an innocent man into a murder is way to different. Reading and Listening is a way different thing rather then to be in the shoes of that character during the event, And now he is in these shoes.

His thinking process is stopped by a ding. Looking at the flying holo screen in front of his eyes. He sees a letter from rob saying.

Letter

Rob here.

I saw or knew what would have happened. I don't have too many word to say.

Congratulation. For making daniel park a murder.

You get character card. As a reward. Use it wisely.

Character card. You get all the experience of their life skills. But character will be form the worlds without any magic or other bullshit power.

Story ends here.

Sorry for not updating, I was busy with university and some house works which led me to have almost none time except sleeping to my self and with exams it just got worse. With winter weather making it worse to maintain a bit of stable sleeping schedule, Which includes the waking up part. 

But I might be free or not who knows how will the uni progress so i hope you all are doing well and happy winter to you all, Have a great day or night peace. 

ALso ignore the grammer or some other things and if you think am wrong leave a comment and will try to work . IF IT IS A GRAMMER MISTAKE IGNORE IT OTHER WISE UI DANIEL WILL COME FOR YOU.