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I Have The Power Of Artifacts!

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What is I Have The Power Of Artifacts!

WebNovel で公開されている、CetusWritings の作者が書いた I Have The Power Of Artifacts! の小説を読んでください。There was a man named Sin-ui, he lived in a world where monsters, gates and the tower exists and it was normal for people to become awakeners and challenge the tower for it's loot and resources.And Si...

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There was a man named Sin-ui, he lived in a world where monsters, gates and the tower exists and it was normal for people to become awakeners and challenge the tower for it's loot and resources. And Sin-ui awakened his ability called, "Object Transmission" it was a useless ability it allowed Sin-ui get any special ability if an object once but no matter what Sin-ui did it was pretty much useless. Even so he was still happy since he lived with his parents and little brother, he was living a happy life even though he wasn't one of those amazing awakeners and was just a normal person with a normal job. But then one day a dungeon break happened monsters came out and killed everyone in Sin-ui's neighborhood including his family but thanks to his ability he was able to last longer than other people. Still in the end he was hunted down by the monsters and he was thrown into an antique shop and he used his ability to protect himself hoping that one of the items there had an incredibly powerful ability. And he got the special ability "Time Transverser" and went back to the time he graduated high school he thought it was a dream and it should have have been possible but he wanted to protect his family and he had to get stronger. Want to know what happens next for Sin-ui? Try reading it now! ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ Please Vote For My Work for the Fantasy Carnival! Bonus Chapters for powerstones! 50 powerstones = 1 bonus chapter per week 100 powerstones = 3 bonus chapters per week

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Jason_Coonce
Jason_CoonceLv2Jason_Coonce

Okay, I like the general idea of the story. I really do, however there is a lot that in my opinion you should add to it and edit. The biggest thing is to ou not creating a world to draw people in. Half of story telling is world building, and you do not do a lot of world building really at all. In the begining you say gates and towers are real In this world, okay but what are those things? How do they impact the world? When did they appear? How do people deal with them? You cannot start a story and expect the reader to already know things that you haven’ explained to them. Another thing is the character development, you just say things that he is without showing that happening. For example, after a big event happens earlier all of a sudden the mc has military training but where was that training when that it traumatic event was happening? When did he get said training? This would be solved by slowing down, taking your time and adding a lot more detail and character exposition.

Daoist2rpAQi
Daoist2rpAQiLv13Daoist2rpAQi

i love the idea, original and captivating ,looks forward to the rest of the story with anticipation ♡

Sleeping_Scholar
Sleeping_ScholarLv14Sleeping_Scholar

Like the story. It's awesome and well-written. Keep up the good work.

Lawrence_Oshim
Lawrence_OshimLv4Lawrence_Oshim

i like the general plot, Sin_ui ability is very abstract not something you will find anyhow, a little bit difficult to comprehend something though but as the story goes on it gets better.

ViYongRay
ViYongRayLv1ViYongRay

it's quite a straight forward novel, it feels like someone just explaining it.. the idea is quite interesting but so far can't really feel anything. Author, you shouldn't rush things too fast, slowly take your time to build the world. Only than will the impact be bigger. Also pls use commas once in a while...

TrashNovel337
TrashNovel337Lv1TrashNovel337

The story is ok but the stability of updates need a lot of improve and character design is slightly lacking so as the the background overall and three star

StumblingtoSuccess
StumblingtoSuccessLv11StumblingtoSuccess

I will first make things clear. The author has superb ideas and interesting stories. And this one is good too in my opinion. The places the author could improve should be his writing quality a bit and the story structure. If he could do that I would have given this a 5-star review.

SnowApathie
SnowApathieLv4SnowApathie

i have only read two chapter for now but I am going to write what I think about this. The story has potential but I think the story is not going enough in details. second repetitions. Some things like the MC's name are too repitiv, try to use other things that describe him. 3. I fell to distant to the mc. I feel like the story is a bit monotone and I can't really relate to what's going on. But overall this is a good story with potential,

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