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I'm The Fated Villain?

A not so ordinary Young man who's just 18 years old transmigrate into the body of the 12 year old young master of The Tian Family in the Immortal world. He got a golden spoon in his mouth after just transmigrating? But that's not all he got. He also got "Fated Villain System" That says he has to kill 'Son of heaven/daughter of heaven?' Now, armed with a Deep and Powerful Family and a villain system. Can he survive and if so, what will he do with it? Let's follow him on his journey. Amateur Author with no experienced And a guy with english not as his first language writes his first Novel Come and give me suggestions as well as criticisms, i'm ready to accept it all!

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Chapter 3: Main quests? Master of The Heavenly Palace!

In the Tian Manor, there was a young man taking a balance stance while placing his feet in a shoulder-width apart and was holding the hilt of a basic wodden sword with a relaxed grip. He had his eyes closed for some seconds before opening his eyes as well as slashing the sword in the air creating a disturbance in the air. He is our protagonist Tian shen and he is practicing swordsmanship and after the last slash in the air, he put the sword down and then take a towel that was in the side and start to wipe his body that didn't hide his six-pac and a perfect body.

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[Tian Shen POV]

After practicing swordsmanship for some time, i decided to take a rest and then head out to the Tianjing City that is owned by the tian family.

After reaching my room and sitting on the bed, i decided to look at the quest's because it has been ringing since my talk with father 2 months ago....

'Quest Board' i said in my mind and then a yellow coloured holographic screen pops up to my side showing quests....

[Quest Board]

[Side quest:Kill the son of fortune for the first time

Reward: A mysterious Box [Silver grade]

Punishment: Nothing! ]

[Side Quest: Kill the son of Heaven or conqueror the daughter of heaven in both body and mind

Reward: A mysterious Box [Gold Grade]

Punishment: Will become a Nemesis of all the Son/daughter of heaven upon first sight! ]

Well, you might be confused as to what are these grade but i found out that the system give reward on a mysterious box and the reward are completely depend on my luck, like i could get a god level weapon or anything but to get precious things the box need to be of a good grades and grades are like this;

Copper

Bronze

Silver

Gold

Platinum

Diamond

God

World

Universe

Multiverse

And there is also a man quest that i can't reject but that quest is also good, let me show you...

[Main quest: Dominate the Eternium Multiverse]

Reward: Box of Mystery x2 (multiverse)

Punishment: Reborn as a girl with both the girl's and boy's private part and also the boobs and with a ugly guy's face with the height of 130cm for 1 million year]

The rewards for completion was good but..... the reward.... i'll rather die than be that..... i'll puke at myself if i really became... and on top of that, 1 fucking million years, i'll have to endure that shameful humiliation for one fucking million years.... fuck, i'll complete the main quest even if it cost me my whole life, i'll do anything to complete that....

Seeing the rewards and punishment, i was rather determined than depressed.... i know most of the people think having a punishment is like being a slave to the dystem but i don't think like that because i know about equivalent exchange, to get something, you must lose something and nothing is free, i mean seriously NOTHING IS FREE so i accept it and i also accept the side quests. I also want to taste— *cough i mean want to know how it feel to conqueror a daughter of heaven. Just thinking about it... hehehehehehehehe

After that, i didn't waste any more of my time and change into a white robe and then head to the city but before that, i checked my money and i had a fucking 1 million high spiritual stone...

That's a ridiculous amount that ordinary people wouldn't get even if they worked their ass off even for a hundred thousand years and i got this in my 11th birthday.....

Being rich sure come with a lot of advantages hah

After that, i headed to the tianjing city. It was bustling with a lot of people going and coming and was full but because they saw me, they all made way for me because they know me; the heir of the tian family....

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[3rd person POV]

"Hey hey, isn't that the young master of the tian family? I heard that he have a godly talent for cultivation. At just the age of 12, he have already reach core formation realm. Hissss he is already a dragon among men and he also have the potential to be the next immortal emperor and i heard that he is also kind." A random bystander said to his friend while his friend nodded and then a lot of people start to talk about him because he was fairly famous in the tianjing city because of his talent and his behaviour and they all respected him a lot.

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[Tian Shen's POV]

'Wow, i'm getting this much attention just by walking in the city... *Sigh* i love this, i don't know why in some novel, people like to be low-key? Isn't it great getting so much attention? I love this hahaha' i thought pleased with the praising and attention he was recieving and after a short walk, he returned to the tian manor and then start to cultivate and practice techniques...

"One Month Later"

After one month, he have reached the 2nd stage of Core Formation realm and today was the day the heavenly palace will host the Disciple Recruitment Ceremony where they'll test the talent of the people taking part in it and talent also have some kind of levels like the lowest is White and the highest is golden. It start with white, green, blue, black, yellow, red and finally golden but for the last thousand of years, there hasn't been any people with golden level talent.....

After i get dressed up, i leave my room and head to the courtyard and there my father was with some people likely the servants and a seven-headed dragon, it was a black dragon with some golden coloured rune in his back and it seems to be pretty powerful too from the pressure it was excluding.....

Reaching there, i greeted my father....

"Good morning father, when will we go there!?" I said in a exited tone because i was exited to finally meet some son/daughter of heaven and harvest them..... i wonder what i'll get from the gold grade mystery box?

"Yes, we'll go there now and i've forgot to introduce to your future mount. Meet him, his name is CaoCao. He's a Earth immortal realm seven-headed dragon that i personally tamed for you! " My father said in a huge smile, proud of his strength and showing off to his son....

Amazed by it, i start to ask my father in a exited tone while we were heading to the Heavenly and the servents were also going there but they were a few meter behind us in a 2 head dragon that was green in colour snd was also excluding his might but it wasn't up to the point like the 8th head dragon had.....

After a hour or so, we reached there, there was a huge gate and 2 powerful guards was guarding the gate while there was a long line of people coming to test their talent to see if they could attract the attention of some elder...

When we reached there,we didn't need to wait as the guards open the door for us and we went ahead and then the guards started to take us to the VIP room where the Master Of the Heavenly Palace was also residing for toady....

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"Hoho, my old friend tian, how are you" a middle aged man with little to now beard said as he open his arms with a huge smile plastered on his face greeted us.....

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