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I'm The Fated Villain?

A not so ordinary Young man who's just 18 years old transmigrate into the body of the 12 year old young master of The Tian Family in the Immortal world. He got a golden spoon in his mouth after just transmigrating? But that's not all he got. He also got "Fated Villain System" That says he has to kill 'Son of heaven/daughter of heaven?' Now, armed with a Deep and Powerful Family and a villain system. Can he survive and if so, what will he do with it? Let's follow him on his journey. Amateur Author with no experienced And a guy with english not as his first language writes his first Novel Come and give me suggestions as well as criticisms, i'm ready to accept it all!

LUFFY_67 · 東方
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Chapter 2: Meeting My Parents! Breakthrough?

After nodding in self aprovement, i decide to change my outfit so, i looked for some time in my wardrobe but the huge amount of clothes took me by surprised and i had to take some time choosing.

After some time of looking, i found it. It was a robe with obsidian black robe that flows gracefully, adorned with intricate silver embroidery along the hems. The fabric is smooth to the touch, reflecting a subtle sheen under the light. The robe is designed with a high collar that adds an aura of sophistication to the young cultivator.

Wearing it, i looked at myself in the mirror and i nodded in self satisfaction and lost in my own beauty

KNOCK!

Just then, a knock came to my door followed by a gentle voice

"Young Master! Can i come in?" The gentle asked as she knocked

"Come in!" I said trying to imitate the previous tian shen's way of speaking but i was already accusative with it after gaining the memory of it.

Then a beautiful young maid came in. She was a breathtaking beauty who looked like she was in her twenties but looks can be decisive in a cultivation world. She has silk long black hair following up to her waist tied in a bun wearing a black and white maid uniform.

"So, what do you need?" I asked as maids usually don't come to my room or rather i don't let maids in my room because most of the time, i'm cultivating.

"Young Master! Master has called you in the dining hall" she said as she bowed a little to show respect.

"Ah okay, lead the way!" I said as he bowed a little and then start to lead the way....

On our way to the dining hall, we went through many rooms showcasing how big the tian mansion really is.

And then after some time and passing through many rooms, we finally reached there....

She knocked the door and then a hoarse deep voice came from the dining hall.

"Come in!" The hoarse deep voice said as she opened the door and stand there while bowing a little.

Upon entering it, i was greeted with a big room that has a long, big table and there were 2 people there and some maids and butlers standing in the corners with their eyes closed with a calm face.

"Father, mother! Good Morning" I greeted them and then they nodded it and mother said

"Son! Come and sit beside me" She said pointing at the chair beside her.

I walk up to the chair, sat and then looked at my father

"Father! Why have you called me? Do you need me for anything?" I said as there was silence as no one was taking the initiative to speak first so to break the silence, i spoke first

"I need to inform you that the Heavenly Palace is holding a disciple Recruitment Ceremony in 3 months and i want to know if you want to take the ceremony or not!" He said as he wore a gentle expression on his face

"Hmm" i start to thought if i should take it or not! There isn't much benefits other than gaining experiences but i can also meet "Son of Heaven/Daughter of heaven" And harvest them so i should take it right?

"Okay father! I'll take it" i said as i was observing father's expression and seeing no changes he must have been expecting me to say that

"Hmm, okay! Anyway how's your cultivation coming along?" He said as he inspect me

"I'm currently at Advance stage if foundation builiding stage and i think i can enter the Core formation realm in 3 days at most" I said with a happy and proudness at my progress

"Good good! I expect no less from my son hahaha" he said as he laugh while stroking his short beard that covered only his neck

"Then, excuse me" i said as i bowed a little and then left the room and went to my own room

Upon arriving, i sat on my bed cross-legged and then start to breath in and out

IN!!

OUT!!

I feel the Qi comming in as i breath in and then out and my dantian filling up...

[4 hours later]

After cultivating for four hour straight straight, i could feel that i was coming closer to reaching Core formation realm and the cultivation realms are;

Each major realm have 9 stages except the foundation building stage...

MORTAL CULTIVATION

Qi Refinement: The initial stage where cultivators gather and refine Qi, the vital energy, into their bodies. [LS: 100 years] (LS= Lifespan)

Foundation Establishment (Beginning, intermediate, advance): Cultivators solidify their foundation, forming a core or foundation within their bodies to store and control Qi. [200 yrs LS]

Core Formation: A significant advancement where cultivators condense their Qi into a core, enhancing their power and abilities. [500 yrs LS]

Nascent Soul: Cultivators reach a stage where they form a Nascent Soul, a powerful manifestation of their spiritual essence. [1000 yrs LS]

Soul Transformation: A stage where cultivators undergo transformations related to their spiritual essence, enhancing their abilities further. [3000 yrs LS]

Spirit Severing: Cultivators sever their mortal ties and ascend to a higher state of being, gaining immense power and understanding. [6000 Yrs LS]

Dao Integration/Immortal Ascension: The pinnacle of Mortal cultivations integrate with the Dao or ascend to an immortal realm, achieving near-godlike status. [11,000 yrs LS]

Weapon Ranks;

Mortal rank

Earth rank

Heaven rank

Black rank

Divine rank

Immortal rank

God Rank

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After cultivating, i headed to training ground and start to practice some offense and defence techniques

[5 hours later]

After five hours of practicing, i feel tired and somewhat hungry so upon reaching my bed, i called a maid using a special type of ringing and then a maid entered my room. The same maid from the morning.

"Young master! Do you need me for anything?" She asked with a confused face as tian shen usually doesn't call maids and only cultivate...

"Yes, i need you to bring me something to eat" I said and then she left.....

After a little over 5 minute, she came back with thr food and then after eating it, i lay on my bed recalling the morning when i was transmigrated and then shortly after that, i fell asleep.....

***

From that day, i repeated the same routine. Waking up, eating breakfast then cultivating and training and then eating something before sleeping.....

***

Like this, 2 months passed in no time since i transmigratted and i also breakthrough to the core formation realm after transmigration's two days bringing me great joy and i also opened the Novice package but to my disappointment, i'm anticipating for the upcoming Disciple recruitment ceremony and i only got 2000 FVP and i saved that and now my status is like this....

"Fated Villain System"

Name: Tain Shen (Austin harrison)

Age: 12 years old (18 years old formerly)

Cultivation Realm: Core Formation (1st Stage)

Lifespan: 500 years

FVP: 2000

....

Skills,

Phantom Steps: Let the user blend in with the shadow and be fast at the speed of light upon practing to the perfection. (Intermediate stage)

Celestial pheonix strike: a rapid and graceful sword technique, let the user enable to dance through opponent's defense with swiftness. Infused with celestial flames, each strike possed a scorching intensity, swiftly incapacitating adversaries. This technique is very deadly with it's precision and fluidity embody the essence of a celestial pheonix. (Advance stage)

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