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HP: Fragments Of A Legacy

作者: MrRover
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With one foot in the shadows of his surname and the other in the promises of an uncertain future, a young boy arrives at Hogwarts. His magic is strong, his legacy unmistakable, yet his path remains unwritten. Between greatness and darkness, every choice brings him closer to discovering who he is meant to become... or what he is destined to unleash.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1. The End of an Era

Nurmengard Castle, 1979

A shadowy figure moved under the cover of the dark night, their steps slow yet deliberate as they advanced toward the fortress of Nurmengard. The monumental structure, once the epicenter of power for the wizard once known as the most feared dark lord in the magical world, now stood as a mere remnant of its former glory.

Now desolate and devoid of life, the castle was an empty shell. Silence reigned within its walls, so profound that it seemed to swallow even the whispers of the wind.

The creak of a heavy door being opened reverberated through the lifeless halls, breaking the stillness. Inside the fortress, within the depths of its most guarded cell, lay its sole inhabitant.

"So, you've finally come," Grindelwald said, his voice calm, his posture unchanging as he remained seated. "It must have been a long journey, Tom."

"That name," the other figure hissed, his tone sharp and venomous. "How is it you know it?"

Grindelwald tilted his head slightly, his lips curving into the faintest hint of a smile. His gaze, piercing and calculating, settled on his visitor. The old wizard seemed almost amused by the effect of uttering "Tom" aloud.

"Though I remain confined to this fortress, my eyes and ears are sharper now than ever," Grindelwald replied with unnerving clarity.

Voldemort's silence in response was loaded, his crimson eyes gleaming with a cold, lethal intensity. He scrutinized the older man, seeking even the faintest glimmer of fear in his expression. But Grindelwald, implacable, returned his stare with serene indifference, as if Voldemort's presence was no more consequential than a passing breeze.

"You've lost your grip on reality, Grindelwald," Voldemort finally said, his voice low and menacing. "Perhaps you fail to understand the gravity of your situation. You should be afraid."

"Afraid?" Grindelwald repeated, his tone devoid of mockery yet equally devoid of submission. "I've already seen all that fear has to offer. Frankly, I find it rather... tiresome."

The Dark Lord took a deliberate step forward, exuding menace with every movement. Grindelwald's gaze followed the younger wizard's approach, his head inclining slightly, as if appraising his poise and bearing.

"I could end your life here and now if I so desired," Voldemort whispered, his voice as cold as ice. "Your words and your life are of no value."

"And yet you haven't," Grindelwald observed, his calm demeanor unshaken. "I fear your journey has been in vain. What you seek is not here, nor was it ever in my possession."

Voldemort leaned closer, his face a mask of barely restrained fury. His wand crackled faintly in his hand, pointed unwaveringly at Grindelwald.

"You dare lie to me," he said, his voice barely above a whisper, but each word carried the weight of a curse. "Do you really believe I will tolerate such insolence?"

Grindelwald raised an eyebrow at the threat, his face betraying no concern. His voice remained steady, unhurried, and irritatingly composed.

"No, I do not believe you will," he said simply. "But your tantrums will not change reality. The rumors you cling to, the legends you chase… they are nothing but stories."

"Do you truly believe the Deathly Hallows are real?" Grindelwald continued, his voice laced with faint derision. A flicker of amusement flashed in his eyes, though his expression remained still. "They are but a fable, crafted to explain that which cannot be understood. There is no power in those myths, only the vain hopes of those who fear what they cannot control."

"Do not play games with me, Grindelwald!" Voldemort roared, his voice as chilling as it was filled with rage. His wand hovered closer to the elder wizard's throat, a sliver away from delivering his wrath. "Tell me where it is. Now."

"Your desperation is pathetic, Tom," Grindelwald said softly, his words dripping with disdain. "You fear death so deeply…" He paused, as if genuinely contemplating his own statement. His eyes sparkled with a peculiar understanding of human nature. Without waiting for a response, he continued, answering his own question. "Of course you do. Who else would defile themselves with such dark magic?"

"You sought to cheat death by cowardly means," Grindelwald went on, undeterred by the dark fire burning in Voldemort's eyes. "You believe immortality will make you invincible, but all you have done is delay the inevitable. Death is not an enemy to be defeated by cheap tricks or stolen relics."

Voldemort's lips thinned, his rage evident in every line of his face. He was not accustomed to such blatant disdain for his achievements, especially not in his presence. The wand in his hand vibrated faintly, as if mirroring the tension in the air.

"You dare lecture me on cowardice, old man?" Voldemort sneered, his voice razor-sharp. "You sought the Hallows yourself and failed."

Grindelwald's smile turned bitter.

"Perhaps I failed," he admitted, his voice heavy with meaning. "But I learned something you never will, Tom." He deliberately emphasized the name, relishing the insult it carried. "The true master of death does not run away from it; he accepts it, knowing it must come. You, however, are a slave to your own fear."

The words stung like venom. Voldemort's face twisted with fury, and, without hesitation, he raised his wand.

"Avada Kedavra!"

A blinding green light filled the cell, and Gellert Grindelwald's body crumpled lifelessly to the floor. His expression, however, remained serene, even triumphant, as if death itself had not claimed victory over him.

Voldemort turned on his heel and left, but the echo of Grindelwald's words lingered in his mind like a slow-acting poison. That calm acceptance of death, that unshakable dignity—it unsettled him in a way he refused to acknowledge.

...

The news of Gellert Grindelwald's death spread like wildfire across the wizarding world, leaving behind shock, fear, and awe. For decades, Grindelwald's name had been synonymous with nightmares, a symbol of near-indomitable dark power. Though he had been imprisoned for years, his shadow loomed large in the collective memory.

Now, the idea that someone had penetrated Nurmengard—the fortress Grindelwald had built as both his stronghold and his prison—to end his life felt like a dark paradox.

Rumors abounded. Some claimed Grindelwald had allowed himself to be killed, weary of his solitary existence. Others believed he had fought to his last breath, defending his stronghold with the ferocity of his youth. But the most pressing question was: Who had managed to kill the man who had once brought Europe to its knees?

It didn't take long for the answer to emerge. The whispered name: The Dark Lord.

In Britain, that name was already feared. But for those elsewhere, Voldemort was a distant rumor, a shadowy figure whispered about in secret. The revelation that this rising dark wizard had vanquished Grindelwald changed everything.

In Hogwarts, Albus Dumbledore received the news in silence. His expression, impossible to decipher, betrayed no emotion. Yet his colleagues noticed his gaze lingered on the horizon, as though contemplating the storm yet to come. He knew better than anyone the implications of Grindelwald's death.

At the Ministry of Magic, panic rippled through the halls. Officials who had downplayed Voldemort's threat could no longer deny the growing storm. Reports of suspicious activity, of alliances forming in the shadows, began pouring in. It was as if the death of Grindelwald had sounded a clarion call, heralding a new, darker era.

The end of Grindelwald's era had given way to the rise of another.

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The author here, just dropping my little contribution (and my 5 stars, because it seems to be tradition). So, what can I say about this story? Well, to start, this idea’s been floating around in my head since the first Fantastic Beasts movie came out. Honestly, I always thought the franchise had a lot of potential! It’s a shame it didn’t meet all the expectations, but it was that same spark that got me started with writing. The idea of exploring the life of a possible descendant of Grindelwald and how they’d fit into the Harry Potter world just grew over time. What would this character be like? What would their connection to their ancestor’s legacy be? And of course, what would happen if their path crossed with Harry’s? It was a mix of curiosity and wanting to try something fresh that led me to create Lucian and the rest of the characters. At first, I really debated whether to follow the canon or not. As a fanfic reader, the stories that grabbed my attention the most were those that dared to explore new paths within the worlds we already knew and loved. But, I also get that the canon, while not perfect, has its own charm and power… something that a lot of authors sometimes forget, and I didn’t want that to happen in my story. So, I decided to walk a fine line: trying to respect the foundation of the magical world J.K. created (though not everything), while also introducing new ideas and characters. In the end, it meant taking some creative liberties to give the story my own twist, without losing its original feel. It was harder than I thought, but I gave it my best shot. Is the story perfect? Probably not, not even close. This is my first serious attempt at writing a story, so I’m still learning how to balance everything—chapter length, pacing, pretty much everything that makes a story work. But, I’m giving it my all to make it something worth reading. So, here I am, super grateful for every reader who’s given it a chance, and excited to see how far this story can go. Thanks for being along for the ride!

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As someone who's been on this website for a long time, specifically as an avid fanfic reader, I can confidently say this story is very very intriguing. I will explain in detail. But for now, the overall sentiment: It's great and a somewhat unique twist on the typical HP fanfics. I'd definitely recommend people read it. Now let's dive into the details. Starting off with the writing quality. I am not the best judge, and probably slightly biased. However, if I do compare it to the others I've read on this site, the writing quality is good. It's descriptive, sensible and invokes a detailed scene. Though sometimes it can feel overpowering, but that's not really anything you'd worry about as a reader. Perhaps, just for the author's reference, sometimes it's best to tone it down so the chapters are more digestible. Regardless, 5 Stars, through and through. I am not one to speak on "Stability of Updates". I already have a horrible track record of that. However, it's not that bad. The author is probably busy, and seeing as its their first book, it probably takes some time getting used to the update schedule. For now, 5 Stars, I don't see why the rating should suffer. Story Development. An interesting twist on the classic HP fanfic, though nothing too wild or off beat. Harry does have female twin in this story, and hence the number of POV's that matter are increased. If you're not into that, its understandable. MC is the grandson of Grindelwald, that's well established. The story is a great attempt at creating tension in Hogwarts through "indirect politics", but not the unsavoury kind. Only 10 chapters in, so I cannot claim that its perfect. But it is intriguing. Character design. The author has done well in crafting their own MC (Lucian). He has a great personality and always seems to know more than he lets on. He is calm, collected and primarily someone that doesn't share much. Not to say that he's not sociable. That's a separate matter. He's quite the enigma, the best way to describe is someone who's probably matured faster than he needed to. He's well versed in what goes on behind the scenes. Nevertheless, that doesn't take away from his inquisitive thoughts, and it seems like there's always a plan. World Background, well the world background isn't something surprising. Typical Hogwarts story. Perhaps in the future we'll get to see France or some other magical country. The story starts off near Diagon Alley, so don't expect it to change course. Look's like the story will spend the first arc or two in the castle. Overall, interesting story. I am happy that its not harem. I hope the author continues writing and uploading. Definitely a story to keep your eye on. I'd also recommend that the author should leave his own review, explaining his perspective on the story and what his circumstances are. It'll help connect with the readers more.

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