Hang-jay the liar?

On the search for a doctor we got lost so we stopped by a nearby island to ask for help and it was a small village with a huge mansion and a PIRATE!?!? Wait no it wasn't a pirate it was a great warrior of the SEA?!? But how he was just as old as me (jack is speaking) (now Rick is) he is probably just a lier a stupid kid who is a wannabe I bet you he doesn't even know what lurks in the sea. (Now Cindy is talking) but what if it's true! What if he is actually a warrior of the sea!! (Rick) no he probably isn't look ask him to fight jack he will quickly decline.

(Jack) oi what's your name? (???) well i great warrior of the sea am the great HANG-LEE! (Jack) okay look cut the act are you actually or not because if you are fight me.. (hang-lee) okay ill fight you but don't start crying when I beat you! (Jack) give me you're best shot. (Rick) okay the fight starts in 3! 2! 1! GO!

(Narrator of the book) jack throws a fire ball out his hands and hang-lee dodges it when he does jack makes it a curve ball then when it's about to hit him jack stops the fire ball. (Jack) see you're nothing you're just a big lier just stop lying and go home. (Hang lee) NO IM DESTINED TO BE A GrWILL DO ANYTHING JUST GIVE ME ANOTHER SHOT!!! (Jack) look Mate I'll do you a favor you can join my crew and we'll help you you help us how does that sound.. (hang-lee) yes of course!! (Rick) are you sure Jack? I mean he is just a lier he can't do anything. (Cindy) YAY A NEW MEMBER!!!! (Jack) soon he'll be a marksman I bet he will shoot our cannons when we get a boat.

(Hang lee) okay I'll tell you how to get to the famous village with all the chefs but let me say goodbye to all my friends!

5 hours later. (Hang lee) guys I got GREAT NEWS! (Jack) what? (Hang-lee) I got us a boat!!!!! My friend is giving us her fathers boat her father approved! (Jack) great.(Then a pirate ship shows up and threatens the village and jack gets very pissed .)

(Jack) ah hell no... look you pirates leave now or else. (???) Or what? What are you going to do kid. (Jack) I'm going to K.I.L.L YOU. Then jack gets a huge speed boost and goes to the captain with his blade of fire cuts his head of and Pierces the crews hearts.. then he burns they're body's... (Cindy Rick) what what did you just do? What's wrong with you jack you just killed a Whole bunch of people!?!? Do you know what you just did?!?!?! (Jack) it's better to kill a little people then those people to kill more am I right... (then jack looks at them as if he's threatening them) (Cindy Rick) I guess (they say scared) (Jack) now let's forget about this and go get us our doctor. (The crew) okay... (Jack erases that memory of him killing the pirates) (the crew now) okay!

To be continued..?