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Hi,
I'm going to clarify a few things here, and ask for suggestions as well.
First, English is not my native language. I write the chapters in Portuguese, then translate them into English, make some corrections and post them.
I ended up missing a few wrong pronouns, and poor Adam had to be called her a few times.
From chapter twenty, I'm translating differently, and being more careful with mistakes, I hope it gets better.
As soon as I manage to advance some chapters, I will do a review of all the others already released.
Clarifications.
The protagonist, Adam Davies. Although he regained his memories, they are like dreams. Due to his perfect memory, he remembers everything to the smallest detail. But that's what they are, dreams, memories of a time gone by.
And from the beginning I made it clear that he had not regained any sense of his former identity, nothing.
He's the one born into this world, Adam Davies, age eleven, wizard.
The only difference is that the memories and the things he lived with made him mature faster. They made him smarter, and made him see magic differently.
Some people are bothered by the fact that he is an 'adult' and falls in love with a child, in this case Isabella.
First, he is not an adult, and the text above explains this.
According to him, he's not in love, he's eleven and so is she, but he's more mature and likes to piss her off.
What enchanted him about her were her eyes, just like Lily's. Which in canon is said to be charming. At no point did he desire Isabella in a sexual way.
Even she doesn't like him that way, they barely had intimate moments, he teases, she gets mad, that's it. She has a bit of admiration because he is strong and confident. Just as she has a little doubt about him, after all, in the time they live in, it's hard to trust.
She's going to be the romantic couple, so gradually I'm going to try to write more about them, in small moments to build up to something bigger. No romantic feelings until Goblet of Fire, fourth year.
Note: if you guys really want another romantic interest for the protagonist, I can kill her near the end and let him finish with another... joke... or not...
It will not be a Harem.
I like Hermione, but she won't be with him. You choose her love interest, Harry or Ron.
Changing the subject.
I don't have many chapters written ahead of the current ones. I usually write each chapter the day before release.
That way, if you have requests or suggestions of what you want to see in the story, you can write them, here or in some other chapter, but here it would be easier for me to read.
It could be about anything, spells, friends, who to kill, places to visit, things to invent, and what year in history would you see this happening. I have a lot of ideas in my head, but I can combine them with your suggestions, or find out that my ideas are shit and change them to yours.
What do you think you would have in the legacy of the founders? And what Merlin would put into each, and into their inheritance.
Do you mind if I extrapolate on the logic of magic? He will already do amazing things when he masters his true power of ancient magic. For example, in the future he will be able to travel between countries, with a snap of his fingers. But I don't consider it extrapolating
About extrapolating, it would be something, like taking another person's consciousness into a dream realm that he created. (I found this very interesting while writing this line and decided I'm going to do it...)
How strong do you think he is at the end of the first year?
I'm the tall one, and I'm in doubt sometimes, but I think he would lose even easily in a duel against Snape and McGonagall. Without catching them off guard.
But for them to be able to kill him, it would be very difficult too, he has tricks that even I don't know about...
Well folks, that's it. Thank you so much for reading, I never expected so many people to like my story. Thank you again.
Be careful when you go to sleep, not to leave your foot outside the cover... You don't know what hides in the darkness of the night.