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Happy Business life

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What is Happy Business life

WebNovel で公開されている、kamal_victorian の作者が書いた Happy Business life の小説を読んでください。Su Yun, died in an accident... But when she suddenly opened her eyes, she realized that she was in the body of a 17-year-old pitiful girl named Su Yun.Her clothes and house look like those from ancien...

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Su Yun, died in an accident... But when she suddenly opened her eyes, she realized that she was in the body of a 17-year-old pitiful girl named Su Yun. Her clothes and house look like those from ancient Chinese dramas. She was horrified when she got to know that she was getting married to a really old man. She was disgusted, but she could do nothing to refute her weak body. In a place where laws weren't focused on women at all, But somehow God took pity on her, and she was sold to a 21-year-old young man named Shen Yu instead. Although the fact that she was sold was heartbreaking for her, a strong woman like her didn't lose hope. After living with Shen Yu, she realized that Shen Yu wasn't a bad person. He never made any unreasonable requests and was a hardworking person. Thinking of how she grew up from rags to riches in her past life, she was determined to make something for herself and Shen Yu. She started a small food business with Shen Yu. It wasn't as easy as being said. A certain shopping system followed her to ancient times. Making her life luxurious to certain extents. Thinking back then, this transmigration was not as bad as she first thought. "Let's get richer than them all!" ***** This is original work. [ On Hiatus, sorry. Dropped too] It's mainly focused on ancient businesses with modern knowledge. Characters: Su Yun (17), Shen Yu (21). [Good-looking, clever, loyal wife X strong, protective, but equally silly husband] Genre: romance, slice of life, drama [Arts used in this book aren't mine but taken from Pinterest; I respect the artists.]

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At what age does life become easier or is everything just a raffle draw full of bullshit luck waiting for you at the next chapter of your life. I never finished highschool for many reasons and my family was more broken then happy or even partially together. Today I turn twenty yet nothing feels accomplished and no matter how hard I try things seem to go left till the glass falls. Most people will use that reference about glass half full or overflowing but mine is unbalanced and always tipping over. My first relationship happened at a bad moment in life and I can only assume he was a good guy but is that my fault or my luck in life, does anyone need to claim fault or does it make us feel better. I was struggling inside my head at the time which made arguments from nothing and they just spiraled endlessly. I tried the doctors and the medication but I was killing a part of myself with each pill and that made me even more depressed. The last argument told me that this relationship wasn't meant to be since my beliefs and his clashed. He wanted me on the pills so I could always be calm, yet I couldn't continue down that road knowing I was losing pieces of me. it's true if we could only argue then why did we not end sooner but how do you end a relationship that became a lightning rod anchoring you. He was a shelter no matter our problems created by me and that shelter kept me safe from the horrors waiting for me everyday I was awake. So I never ended it till that single moment he basically told me, it was okay to lose me if it helped me be at peace inside. I can't blame him or those words but I also couldn't stay in that relationship, but just maybe if my life was different it would have been beautiful. Every day after that I had to cope with myself and find the correct way to coexist inside my own head, a battle I win and lose everyday. A few months later my job had to lay me off due to money and merging companies which made living arrangements problematic. Going home was an option but to what end exactly since going back to a broken home wouldn't help me in any capacity. So a friend let me rent her spare room which was a storage closet but I couldn't complain if it gave me a roof and somewhere to sleep. She was a good girl that made her way in life following the rules but she was never a push over either. Leading me to often wonder if I was a pushover and I just never noticed it. Within a week I had found a job at a cafe and part time work at a construction job which helped me bring in cash quickly. My managing skills came in clutch with that job since they had no other openings and my experience was above the requirements they wanted. working at a factory gave me something useful at least and all the aggravations leading those people paid off for me. Even though my mind is a mess I can work effortlessly and keep moving forward in life with minor hiccups. After a month of saving I found a building that needed an owner which now serves as my home and business. The couple gave me an offer I couldn't turn down and equally they couldn't wait to go on vacation which is where all my money went but it made me feel good inside at least. Some good happened but a lot of bad followed alongside it equally and before my birthday arrived I found myself sitting in jail for trying to help a stranger. Even though it was a misunderstanding, it affected some of my work and even my own business creating problems and creating decisions. {Some missing text due to limited length for this part, this is the introduction to the story though.}

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kamal_victorian作者kamal_victorian

Hello, It's author..! If you looking for a sweet couple, hardworking people,Tons of drama and a System..this story is for you. A cute couple aiming for riches.here's the Main Characters...

Zeera_Jay
Zeera_JayLv4Zeera_Jay

This is a good read with a gripping plot, the only thing I noticed that needs working is the spacing of the paragraph to make it much easier to read, aside that your book have potential and a good description. Keep it up dear Author.. .

SoulNexus
SoulNexusLv3SoulNexus

I really don't know, what to say about this novel.As this was my first time reading a female lead , romance, drama.I had read once, it was like my Loyal Husband After the divorce.===========================================So this is the thing I wanted to say that I hadn't read any novel with this type a lot and which is based, not in a modern era.The story had a Quite story, like it's good and well paced, i like the chemistry of su Yun and shen yu both liked each other but couldn't say its like who will say first.The chapters are bit too described, like a same sentence is getting expanded, author you need to made a simple flow of the words.The grammer is good not exceptional but better,it needs proofreading.

Maeve_Lindley
Maeve_LindleyLv11Maeve_Lindley

This story is good and it has potential especially as the author says it is becoming very popular! I agree with others you would benefit from a beta reader to check spelling, punctuation and grammar. Keep going :)

Darja_Renen
Darja_RenenLv3Darja_Renen

Some parts are bumpy and it would need a beta reader, but I genuinely enjoyed the story. It’s kinda sweet and I took a liking in female lead.

Visionary_M
Visionary_MLv11Visionary_M

The story is still in the beginning so we are still learning about the characters and the direction of the plot. So far, I think the pacing is good, since they just met it's normal that their conversations are not yet long. My only suggestion is to recheck word spellings. If you write fast, you can use either, grammarly, prowriting aid or quillbot to catch misspellings for you. Looking forward to how the story will progress.

Vee_High
Vee_HighLv4Vee_High

The book is only three chapters and I can already tell it has an interesting twist for us ahead. With how the mc is able to remain calm despite what was happening to her displays her wisdom as someone who has lived a purposeful life before. Though there's still rooms for improvements, author is doing a great job! !

Treein
TreeinLv12Treein

Although there's not much content released yet, it's clear that this story has a very good beginning. I hope the author can maintain this momentum because I'm eager to see more content soon. Also, as other comments have mentioned, the paragraphs in the novel are too long. The author might consider making each paragraph shorter to enhance the reading experience for mobile users.

zowji
zowjiLv3zowji

The writing quality can be improved by spacing out the structures of the paragraph but I liked the flow of how the story was going. Seeing the MC being sold off at the start of the story really brings a good idea of where her character is coming from. Overall the novel is written!

the_spreme_being
the_spreme_beingLv2the_spreme_being

The novel has potential, and the characters are good too. My only suggestion is to break down the longer lines so that the text flows through easily. Overall awesome and I would love to see more.

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