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GUARDIAN OF HEAVENHELL

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WebNovel で公開されている、itsuki_kun1195 の作者が書いた GUARDIAN OF HEAVENHELL の小説を読んでください。...

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The plot is good, would stick around to see what comes of the main characters..............................................................................

BlackSnowAngel
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So far there are only a few chapters so the possibilities of this story is endless. Its an interesting start and the character are interesting. There are a few pacing problems and the the where to place the words but it seems this is the authors fist try of writing a series. SO, with that being said, dont give up and keep writing.

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This book is good, in terms of storyline, it's just that there are too many uses of the words 'said', 'asked', 'replied', etc. without telling how they're do that conversation, it'll looks like they're just standing and talking each others. And.. Lack of visualization of characters, places, skills, etc. I hope you adjust it soon. That's all :3

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