Homeless_Traveler
Dear readers, Hello! I'm Homeless Traveler, a newcomer in creative writing!
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Homeless_Traveler3 years agoコメントBut the teacher said to exclude rune, incantation and magic circle?
- Homeless_Traveler3 years agoコメント
Bro, did you just experience a flood? Hope you're save
- Homeless_Traveler3 years agoコメント
This dialogue is a bit confusing...
この段落は削除されました。 - Homeless_Traveler3 years agoコメント
Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio
この段落は削除されました。 - Homeless_Traveler3 years ago発表
The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)
この本は削除されました。 - Homeless_Traveler3 years agoに返信 Aira_Rin
Thank you for your reviews!
- Homeless_Traveler3 years agoに返信 Rin_Nurnia
Thank you so much for your reviews!
- Homeless_Traveler3 years ago発表
The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!
この本は削除されました。 - Homeless_Traveler3 years ago発表
The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!
