Fenikkusu Sureiyā

love the story so far it reminds me of demon slayer and one piece it's going places keep up the good work bro 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

This is a must read. The synopsis alone got me hooked on the story. It's really interesting and I believe there are more interesting scenes ahead. Hope you release more chapters to satisfy our curiosity.

The story shows so much potential and the title of the story is nice Writing Quality:4.5/5 Story Development:5/5 Character Design:5/5 Updating Stability:4.9/5 World Background:5/5 One thing which you should change is the conversation that you had written was like play(I mean when we wrote any play type story then we indicate like this, Penny:I like this one)....for more you should read others author's book so that you can gain more experience...reading forward...keep writing author[img=recommend]

What i liked about what the author did was give a few chapters of information about his story for people who don't understand the terms. The story is only a handful of chapters, but i see potential in where it could go. It seems the author had written this story in a play or movie script format. It can be a bit uncomfortable for some for others not. It all depends on your taste.

First time reader and I have got to say I love the plot of the story and the synopsis.i like the fact that your taking it slow for the first two chapters, your work is so easy to read and you have got a very unique writing style. i hope you keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapters

I got to be honest I love this book everything about it the world building the characters the plot the power system this author knows how to write and in every chapter you can see the hard work and planning he puts into this book you can feel the characters in every chapter it's like your there with the characters please guys check it out.

i have read for the author before and i know that this novel is not going to fail my expectation , make sure to read it guys , everything is great, the writing style, the update, the world and also the mc . what are you aiting for , make sure to show some love

This story has alot of potential i love the tittle of the series and the synopsis i also love the characters names so far nothing to hard to pronounce and thier so simple this might be a novel but i feel like im in the world and on the journey with cory and i know I'm not the only one who thinks this. keep up the good work bradzie your going places trust me.

looking forward for all of your chapters, cause this book has potential [img=update][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp]