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Empire: ashes of the fallen

作者: krish_patel
Fantasy
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What is Empire: ashes of the fallen

WebNovel で公開されている、krish_patel の作者が書いた Empire: ashes of the fallen の小説を読んでください。Jinzo Watanabe has always felt lost in life, never quite sure of his purpose or what he wants to become. His fellow students and peers all seem to have their paths set, but for Jinzo, the future remai...

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Jinzo Watanabe has always felt lost in life, never quite sure of his purpose or what he wants to become. His fellow students and peers all seem to have their paths set, but for Jinzo, the future remains unclear. That is until he dies a gruesome death and is given a second chance at life in another world. From the moment Jinzo opens his eyes in this new world, he can sense the danger that surrounds him. This place is like nothing he's ever experienced before - a twisted, malevolent land that seems to want him dead. As Jinzo adjusts to his new surroundings, he must confront powerful enemies and uncover the secrets of this new world in order to find his true purpose. Will he be able to overcome the challenges ahead, or will he succumb to the darkness that threatens to consume him? The prologue deals with on how the mc got into another world. I'm also going to upload this on Wattpad, Scribble hub, Tapas All rights reserved.

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krish_patel
krish_patel作者krish_patel

Hi, Author here. This is my first time writing a novel. It's a dark fantasy Isekai, This story has some familiar Isekai genre elements, but I've added my own unique twists to make it fresh and interesting (not adding the annoying troupes). I would be grateful if you could take a moment to read the prologue and discover what sets my novel apart. If you find it interesting, I am confident that you will enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you for your time!

Ulirec
UlirecLv3Ulirec

This novel is very well-written, with good descriptions of events, and the first few chapters were interesting. However, I feel that it could be improved if you show more details about the main character's personality.

Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4Ninestar619_5803

Must say this book is too great to be ignored. The title and start all captures same does the story. Writing and the world building is easy flowing that it makes understandings. Great book. Keep it up author.

1cutecat
1cutecatLv41cutecat

I love the plot. Its well written, the characters are described so accurately. And the best part is the ability to pull us into this dreadfully well described environment which leaves you wanting. Simply wonderful.

kappukeki
kappukekiLv10kappukeki

I loved the vivid descriptions of the protagonist's surroundings, and the atmosphere of dread that the writer managed to evoke. The language was evocative and drew me into the story, making me want to know more about the protagonist's journey. There's a good balance between the action and the atmosphere, which makes the passage compelling. I think there are a few areas which merit further exploration: 1) The passage could benefit from a more vivid description of Jinzo's emotions. His thoughts and feelings should be explored more in order to allow the reader to connect more deeply with the character. 2) There is a lot of action happening in the story, but it could benefit from more details in order to create a more immersive experience for the reader. 3) The setting and the environment could be further fleshed out to add more depth. The descriptions of the flora and fauna should be expanded upon in order to create a more vivid picture for the reader.

prajnya_shriyan
prajnya_shriyanLv12prajnya_shriyan

This novel is very well written. Loved the plot and character design. Looking forward for more chapters. Highly recommend. Keep up the good work.

vorlefan
vorlefanLv2vorlefan

Amazing! If you enjoy good descriptions of the scenario, characters and how they are feeling plus they inner thoughts, then you need to give this novel a shot! The battle scene was amazing too. I'll be following it. Writing Quality: There are some minor issues sometimes with grammar, but nothing a rewrite don't fix. All in all, keep up the good work :)

SupremeArchmage
SupremeArchmageLv1SupremeArchmage

"Empire: Ashes of the Fallen" by Krish_Patel is a touching novel that tells the story of Jinzo Watanabe, a troubled and poor young man who struggles to change his life. Through the vivid description of the poorly managed apartment and the chaotic city in which he lives, the author transports the reader into Jinzo's mind and makes them feel his anger and despair. Krish_Patel's ability to capture Jinzo's emotions and thoughts is impressive, making the reader feel great sympathy for his character. I'm eager to see what happens in the next chapters, and where the author takes Jinzo on his journey through life. Overall, "Empire: Ashes of the Fallen" is a heart-touching story that you cannot miss if you are a lover of fiction!

Maxemillian
MaxemillianLv2Maxemillian

This is a good novel, I like the idea of going to another world.

ASAH1
ASAH1Lv1ASAH1

Interesting plot with nice character designed, the world background was well described, anyway to starting most paragraph with character name may disrupt the flow of the reading. Since now only 4 chapters was released the story seem to develop into more intense, so I will waiting for more update.

TranslatorKun
TranslatorKunLv3TranslatorKun

Very Nice concept, Jinzo feels like a cool character. Your chapter length is pretty big which is good. Keep updating man[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Zetrous
ZetrousLv1Zetrous

The prologue is really interesting, the description of characters is well written along with the surrounding areas. It is intense as I'm left wondering what would happen in the next chapters.

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