Dual Cores: Mage's Conquest

I am writing the review on my own novel, so anyone who wants to read it can get a little image in their mind about my novel.My story main character is male lead, who was previously a high school boy but he got reincarnated here in this world known as Everdawn. well I don't want give spoilers in it because I know how frustrating it is if you're reading something good and someone you know gives spoiler and ruin your fun. So please read it for understanding more and being a part of mine and my character journey and if you like it then add it to your library and support me by giving power stones.And i can assure that I will release at least 5-6 chapters a week and more if I have free time.

Just started reading this book. I like the writing style of the author and the story is also good. It's just that some names in the story are a bit complicated to pronounce.

I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too.

I love the unique power system on this work Great job author !

better quality of writing than most novels i read, amazing storyline and background, characters are engaging and interesting. I am giving all 5 star, and highly support you!

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Within these pages, the author conducts a literary orchestra, harmonizing plot, character, and emotion into a breathtaking crescendo. The story's ebb and flow mirror life's complexities, as characters evolve through challenges and triumphs. Themes of resilience and identity are interwoven with a lyrical elegance that's simply enchanting. Each chapter unfurls like a new layer of a cherished painting, leaving readers immersed in a world both familiar and extraordinary. This book is a testament to the profound artistry of storytelling, leaving an indelible imprint on the heart and mind.

Great story,great world interesting plot the characters are good but sometimes the grammars fell kinda hard to follow even with that it was well written impressive work my friend keep up the good work

The type of magic introduced distinguishes it from other works in the same genre and its very descriptive. Author you're on to a winner with this one

The book has a decent world background which is sensible since the first chapter. The plot is pretty interesting and so are the characters. Even the power system is pretty well built. I liked the relationship described between the family members and their love for each other as well as the side characters, each perfectly crafted. The author has a way with words, writing smoothly and perfectly enjoyable. The only thing, that might both be a flaw and a strength of the novel, is the lengthy descriptions of every small and big detail, which makes it easy to imagine the scene yet boring to read. Overall, this is a good read amd also recommended.

Great story, Great plot and interesting character, I will be reading all the chapters and continue waiting for the new chapter to be released, keep on writing, you’re amazing, 👍

This has to be one of the most descriptive novels I've read, you can literally visualise perfectly by the way he explains them. keep up the good work👍✨

A good pacing and well-developed story! The plot is interesting and the descriptions are very vivid and detailed. It's a satisfying work and I feel really enjoy to read. Keep up your good work!

Very good and interesting novel. Just a suggestion kind of use simple words since some may feel confused. Also, I love the descriptions, world building and characters. This three are the strength/pillars of the novel

I like the story line and characters development design. The details are great. I’m enjoyed reading this book. Will be waiting for the next chapter to be released. Thank you author for your excellent work. Will be recommending this book to everyone 👍😊

From the synopsis alone, you can think this story will surely serve you a wonderful adventure and interesting plot plus the narration is vivid and writing is great. Good jobe author, keep it up!👏👏

Great job! I'm enjoying your story. Just a suggestion, consider using simpler words that everyone can understand. It helps readers flow through the story without needing to look up unfamiliar words. Anyway, Keep writing and do your best

The Core based magic introduced in the story is what makes this book different from many other books with Isekai tropes. All that's left is more development of the story that would show more uniqueness to the usual storyline of this kind of tropes. There are still a few chapters so I hope that this book can show its difference to others and to get more attention from the readers. Keep working on the book, Author.

I like the story-line. The characters are well written too. Personally, i think that there are too much details given in certain parts of the first few chapters and this kindof slows the story progress... not that it's a bad thing though because each writer has their own unique style. There is so much promise in the story and can't wait to see how it turns out.