Dragon King of Apocalypse (Douluo Dalu 3)-Completed

So far, this is the best fanfiction I have seen of Douluo Dalu 3 and Fairy Tail. The character development is just the right pace. The main character is a little on the op side but it's still within the range of not making the story straight up boring. The main character doesn't get strength all of a sudden, but rather strives for it at a steady pace. Personally, I would recommend this fanfiction for all the Douluo Dalu and Fairy Tail fans because I think that it would be a waste for a story like this to be covered in dust longer than it already has.

MC wastes his time instead of training. his father gets an invitation card of best school there is, the spirit pagoda. and yet he doesn't tell anything about it to MC thus he admits himself into some backwater school. He wastes his time earning money instead of becoming stronger. Must MC really as weak as the original story MC? this is a fanfic. change something. he could've at least reached rank 40 if not 50 if he diligently trained himself in a forest by the time of age 9. Why must he be weaker in rank. whats the use of being able to fight higher rank? why must he be as old as everyone else. he should atleast be many ranks higher than his peers and yet hes sometimes very lower than his peers although he can fight head on. whats the use of his useless reincarnation if he doesn't even get stronger in early age. earnling money by doing some chores and hammering metals is waste of time. even if he hunts monsters in the forest he could earn heflty some.

Premise was so good for this story but actually reading it became a chore, Novel wants to follow the canon that it limits what mc can do. i mean he wasted 3 YEARS just to earn money just to be a spirit master, I MEAN WTH he was the strongest dragon slayer in his past life and in this life he is just thinking "wut is love", "wut is family", etc why even make it a reincarnation story if the growth rate is same as the original MC. It's like reading the original again with little changes sigh...

Disappointing as it introduces little things new as the characters are one dimensional and every villain is card board cutouts. I don't see the appeal of this series as its rinse and repeat of the same things

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More than 10 chapters not mastered. Our MC is acnology (as the author says), but all his experience over 400 years (I don’t know how old he is), as it were, he isn’t just a doll who learns to love a family and so on. The beginning is nowhere more boring since it is completely copy-copied from the original work. (I don’t know how it will be further, but due to the completely copied principle I lost all interest in this fan fiction) (I used Google translator)

Reading this is waste of time . As expected even theres a lot of chapters not too many people like this. This is more like a sci fi rather than action. Actions is boring and I don't even know how strong mc right now.. Author just keeps copying anything from original and he only change mc name to achnologia . Even mc is achnologia all he do is just follow what the original mc did. That's a stupid coincidence

The story might get better over chapter 30 but I couldn’t do it. If you are expecting a dude (which is Acnologia who took over Tang Wulin’s body) coming in, kicking butts and taking names with the power of Acnologia than you would probably be disappointed. In terms of the powerlevel of the mc, it’s basically just Tang Wulin but stronger and still gets his butt whooped, now and then. The grammar is at that level where it won’t make the story unreadable but it will most likely tick you off a bit. Also if you somehow developed bad memories from Fairytail about the powers of deus ex machina friendship, reading about Acnologia discovering the powers/values of friendship in this fanfic will definitely trigger bad flashbacks or maybe just outright kill your desire to read any further. So in conclusion, this is a weak to strong fanfic so far as of chapter 30. It might get better or it might not. But as the same of many cartoon/anime villians before me, the powers of friendship has banished me back into the shadow realm.

This is the best fanfiction I have seen of Douluo Dalu 3 and Fairy Tail. The character development is just the right . The main character is a little on the op side but it's still within the range of not making the story straight up boring. The main character doesn't get strength all of a sudden, but rather strives for it at a steady pace. Personally, I would recommend this fanfiction for all the Douluo Dalu and Fairy Tail fans because I think that it would be a waste for a story like this to be covered in dust longer than it already has.

I have to say that this a really great novel, that is until the novel reaches around chapter 65. Honestly it really great novel and then the author started adding his own unknown elements which started to ruin the novel, then he did it again 50 chapters later. I might read this later but for now i'm out

Got to ch. 28 and couldn't read this story anymore. Grammar is awful. Characters feel 2D. No character growth at all. Mostly the grammar that got me. I'm auto-correcting and fixing sentences in my mind and it devalues the story. I see there's 100+ chapters uploaded in a month. Author could update less and fix sentence structures and grammar then this story would be alot better.

One of best douluo fanfiction. Good and natural feel to the concept of fairy tale and douluo. Presence of zeref is balancing factor i most like as protagonist is not 100 percent in every thing. Please develop your god slaying power more. And he absorb the soul of fanrir did it comes out as soul spirit and why not to absorb rings of calamities by tang and his two girl friends and also remember silver spear can absorb the abyssal creature.

Five star for the time being since his badass is really cool Pls changes his soul spirit to a stronger one and give him new soul spirit eery breakthrough pls, and his battle armor, not heavy silver but use a godly or super rare material to make his battle armor, since we already knew what his battle armor already if you follow the plot, its just broken when you know what already will happen. Also make his silver grass to evolve further than blue emperor Since his grandmother can become ancient golden tree, why he cant evolve his martial soul to that level, which is eternal tree in dd4 now after absorbing the abyss.

One of the most beautiful and sublime things I have read in my short life is a masterpiece that I would recommend to anyone. Thank you for writing such a beautiful book and for the laughs and good times you gave me... Thank you very much.

First of all Mr.Author you should at least fix your grammatical errors, i've read 13 chapters so far but in all those 13 chapters the grammatical errors is so obvious to the point where i as a reader whom english is not my native language can easliy percieve the grammatical errors that you made Second you made tang wulin way too fucking overpowered a spirit master vs spirit ancestor tell me author did your brain has stopped working? even with dragon slayer magic its too much and even more in condition where tang wulin did not unseal the first seal of GDK and again Mr.Author did your brain has stopped working?

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Bro this is too soft for acnologia And I dont like the Harem choices,stop being in love there is no way even to acnologia the like these girls and the why the **** you need that much mom wtf is going on,his parents"step",Real parent"by blood",life goddess"I like it because i was sorry for their condition"And last thing I hate it"Ya Li chick OMG WHY THE FUCKK YOU DO THAT. And last thing I hate Da Ming And Er Ming attacking MC seriously(with world laws)And he Don't kill them, I mean wtf.ok And last(really) why he get taking on the problems of the world(every problems) 😠😠😠

Request to the author. I know it would be too much to ask this but either way. Could you make a status sheet for the Shrek Devils/Tang Wulin's friends (Gu Yuena, Xie Xie, friends from his generation), since I want to know their abilities which I can't really remember clearly. So it would be perfect if you could make a status aux chapter for the abililites, not all but the most importants like their spirit essences and spirit abilities, and maybe techniques. Good story! Keep going!!!

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I really liked the story and hope you write another novel soon One thing I want to point out is that acnalogia should be more agressive and ruthless from what i saw from fairytail Another thing is that he should not have egnoliged so many people as parents and I find it weirldcthe Acnalogia is willing to less 8 people be his partents Another thing is i think he should have another spirit or his spirit should have been influenced by his slayer powers or outright different spirit