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TridentLv105yr
2019-07-02 15:22

First of all Mr.Author you should at least fix your grammatical errors, i've read 13 chapters so far but in all those 13 chapters the grammatical errors is so obvious to the point where i as a reader whom english is not my native language can easliy percieve the grammatical errors that you made Second you made tang wulin way too fucking overpowered a spirit master vs spirit ancestor tell me author did your brain has stopped working? even with dragon slayer magic its too much and even more in condition where tang wulin did not unseal the first seal of GDK and again Mr.Author did your brain has stopped working?

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IdioticBaka
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Why would the author care about that, when most readers enjoys it... Dude your a kill-joy.

BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4

First to improve quality. Second just cause most enjoy isn’t any reason not to fix that’s just lazy. Third, if you're talking about him being to op it’s really about perspective not everyone enjoys no common sense but again everyone has there own opinions.

IdioticBaka:Why would the author care about that, when most readers enjoys it... Dude your a kill-joy.
BaconLover
BaconLoverLv4

You do realize Acnologia has hundreds of years of practically non-stop fighting on his opponents... Right?

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