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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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151 Chs

A Whiff (120)

"Why are you still in your Super Saiyan form?"

Hanasia had noticed that Broly hadn't powered down in a few days.

"I want to see how long I can stay in the form, if I don't power down it seems I can just be in the state forever," Broly answered.

"Must be nice, I get really bitchy if I stay in the state for too long"

Broly smirked.

He felt that to a degree as well but as time passed, it decreased and compared to the rage he felt in the Legendary State, the Super Saiyan form seemed much more manageable by comparison.

"Alright, come at me!" Broly said, readying his battle stance.

"You're the Legendary Super Saiyan, I'm not going to beat you," Queen Vegeta said, entering Super Saiyan.

"I know but I'm not going to fight back, I'm just going to dodge," Broly said, itching to go.

Queen Vegeta raised her eyebrows but remained silent, she concentrated her ki, allowing it to flow through her body and expanded her muscles, growing size instantly.

For some curious reason, the size of her breasts seemed to grow as well.

Broly looked in admiration, he tried to copy this effect but his muscles refused to get any bigger.

9 feet seemed to be his genetic limit.

Hanasia stopped growing, making sure that her muscles were the right size so her speed wouldn't be brought down.

"You're getting better"

"I'm still not nearly as strong as you"

Broly chuckled.

"Second place in the history of your race isn't that bad"

Hanasia smiled wryly.

"Enough talking!" she pouncing at Broly.

'No block just dodges!'

Broly also moved forward, trying his best to engage Queen Vegeta while not getting hit. She struck at him quickly, using little of her own strength so that she could hit as fast as possible, aiming for the huge target that was Broly's upper body.

'Hmph!'

She didn't waste any time and enveloped her body with ki, moving much faster than before, Broly consistently making last-second dodges.

"You're very fast for someone so big," Hanasia said frustratedly, now using kicks to try and catch Broly.

Broly smirked.

"You know that better than I do"

His words didn't go over her head and she kept quiet as her face reddened, moving with even more speed.

'She's getting faster?'

Broly's eyes dashed around their sockets as they kept up with Queen Vegeta's movements, tracking her down with just enough time for Broly to move.

PSH!

A small ki wave burst out of Broly as he added energy to his steps to continue to dodge in time.

"Just get hit already!" Hanasia said getting impatient.

Broly ducked, weaved, back-dashed, jumped up and jumped over, systematically dodging all of Queen Vegeta's attacks with vigour. Once every so often, he would let his guard down and she would do something unconventional but he would still be able to evade the attack without so much as a graze.

"HMPH!" Hanasia grunted as her aura thickened, the yellow energy around concentrating as she got fed up with hitting air.

"I will hit you!" she declared, moving at Broly with conviction.

Broly's eyes widened, watching her fists blur in his vision.

'Even in Super Saiyan?'

He dodged them hurriedly, moving from side to side, weaving each individual strike.

'What is this feeling?'

Broly's hair changed to black, Hanasia didn't blink though and continued to press Broly, jumping and moving all her limbs in co-ordination to attack him.

'What is he-'

Broly moved his arms up and down, feeling the air around as he embraced the new state he felt.

KSH!

He extended both his palms, striking Queen Vegeta fiercely in the chest, sending her rocking into the opposite wall. Seemingly in response, the wall shifted apart, pushing out a thick metal barrier.

CLANG!

Queen Vegeta's body dented the sheet of metal before dropping down to the ground, the wall closing back together and releasing the metal.

"What the fuck! You said-"

Queen Vegeta's eyes found Broly who felt lost in his own energy, his ki signature blurring as the whitish aura enveloped him.

Broly's eyes snapped open.

"It's gone!" he said despairingly.

"What's gone?" Hanasia asked, not getting what was going on.

"T-The feeling! It's gone!" Broly continued, upset that he couldn't even grasp the power before it disappeared.

Queen Vegeta sighed.

She walked up to Broly, levitating so that they were at the same height and looked him in the eyes.

She smiled warmly and sealed his lips, biting them slightly before breaking away.

"Do you feel better now?"

"Y-Yeah," Broly said slowly.

"Good, now get ready, we're going to go again," she said, getting back to her feet and readying her stance.

'What the fuck was that energy?' Yami said, unable to recognise it himself.

'I have no idea,' Broly replied honestly.

'You're a freak that can only get stronger,' Yami said, not even able to be surprised anymore.

Broly continued to dodge Queen Vegeta's attacks but he was unable to feel the same energy as before, frustrated that he couldn't produce the feeling he couldn't describe.

(Six Hours Later)

BANG!

"Finally!" Queen Vegeta cried victoriously, successfully hitting Broly.

"Why are you celebrating?" Broly asked.

Hanasia's eyebrow raised.

"Because I hit you," she said simply.

"No you didn't!" Broly said, feigning outrage.

Queen Vegeta's face broke, her expression becoming harsh and fierce.

"What do you-"

Broly disappeared from in front of her, reappearing behind her and moving his arms to trap Queen Vegeta in a hug.

"Relax, it was only a joke," he said, feeling up her abs before moving onto her chest.

"Oh yeah?" she said seductively, pressing her ass against Broly's waist.

"Umf!"

She turned around in one slick movement, wrapping her legs around his waist and sealed his lips, stretching a palm down to his trousers and stroking his power pole.

"What do you want me to do?" she said, whispering into his ear this time.

Broly's breathing became heavy, his confident demeanour straining under the sudden stimulation, he wanted to speak but knew he would moan if he did.

"Close your eyes for me," she said slowly, climbing off of him.

Broly waited anxiously, his spear at half-mast.

20 seconds had passed.

He opened his eyes impatiently only to realise he was by himself in the room.

'That's not a good look buddy,' Yami said softly, resisting the urge to burst into laughter.

Broly sighed out, realising he was had.

'I say you pin her down and have your way with her,' Yami said, offering solutions.

'Don't worry, she'll come back eventually' Broly said, picking himself up and heading back to his room.

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