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Isreal Styles the most celebrated pop star and Anthonio Moreno the alluring model were my favorite celebrities residing in Seattle. The night I eagerly anticipated meeting Anthonio for the first time took a dark turn when, after getting pretty drunk at his club party in New York, I found myself assaulted by my celebrity crush.This traumatic incident fueled my hatred towards celebrities and men. Unfortunately, I couldn't share my ordeal without evidence, especially considering I was just the unwanted daughter of a New York oil baron while Anthonio ruled the roost in Seattle with his captivating allure.Fate intervened when my father decided to relocate us to Seattle, seeing this as an opportunity to unveil Anthonio's secret behind his mask and get revenge. I embraced the idea of the move.In Seattle, I was confronted with a life-altering new reality – a planned marriage with the son of Mr. Montgon. My father arranged this marriage to solidify ties in the oil business, and I found myself wondering who the hell Mr. Montgon's son was. Feeling as if life had taken an unexpected turn against me, I accompanied my diehard childhood friends to Isreal Styles' concert.Despite my hatred for celebrities and men, I had no option but to go with my friends. After the concert, I met the most popular person in Seattle face-to-face for the first time, Isreal Styles, the most alluring pop star. We met in a pretty unusual place – the restroom obviously making out with some stripers Feeling disgusted, I didn't hold back, throwing some not-so-nice words at him. He warned me never to let him set his eyes on me again with a cold glare.From that day on, I hated my two favorite celebrities. But my father, indifferent like a masked stranger, dropped the bombshell – Isreal Styles is my soon-to-be husband. My nights were haunted by these two celebrities, fueling my determination to reveal Anthonio's secret behind the mask. I stalked Anthonio just to uncover his secret.One frosty evening, I got a call from Anthonio Moreno. It was strange, surprising that he requested to meet if I wanted to know who he truly is. I was determined to uncover Anthonio's true identity and get my justice, so I accepted his invitation.Upon arrival, I prompted him to remove the mask. Surprisingly, he accepted. My heart raced as he attempted to remove the mask. My whole life crumbled when he unveiled his face, revealing a face that made me wish he never did.

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EnjoyedAuthorEnjoyed

I forgot to give my shameless 5 star review haha. Anyway, this is the first fanfic I'm going to finish so you can consider it my first story with really minor experience. Expect it to get better as time goes on and don't hesitate to point out any mistakes

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This is my personal review of my story. The writing quality to ok at best. I am new to this so I expected it to be this bad. There aren't many typos but the wiring structure is terrible. The story development so far is bad, but that is to be expected because it is the early arcs of Tensura. It will 100% at least get a bit better in later arcs when I go into the wn. Character design is basically the same as Tensura, just Munuru is added. Munuru is unnecessarily op, much more than the op of Tensura. Updating stability is bad, I take very long breaks when I do and at this moment if chapter 19 I am sick so It will be varied. World background right now is bad, but in future chapters it will be revealed why I put it at 4 stars. You can decide to read this if you want but don't expect much. I will be doing a remake of this, just without the unnecessary opness. There will also be sequels with better overall reviews.

WarTheHorseman
WarTheHorsemanLv4WarTheHorseman

"I am Munuru, the blade of Rimuru, and I have never known defeat." Haven't read yet but already, the concept sounds amazing.................

HankTheFisherMan
HankTheFisherManLv4HankTheFisherMan

Its just boring.. i stopped halfway through chapter 8, because its just exactly the same as the original. The mc doesn’t add anything to the story at all to the point where you can remove the mc from the story and almost nothing changes. Everything rimuru did in the original he still does in this fanfic so its not like the mc took his place. She is litteraly there for decoration. At an early stage she is ridiculously op, but i don’t have a problem with that. The thing i do have a problem with is the fact that even though she has so much power she just follows the exact same plot. I dont know if this changes later, but this is what i think of the story in the first 8 chapters.

gg_gg_0642
gg_gg_0642Lv4gg_gg_0642

why delete chapter's. .. .. . .. . hhjbnn

TRUE_R_O_B
TRUE_R_O_BLv4TRUE_R_O_B

I like it keep it up and will be waiting for any new fanfic you make

Robert_Thompson97
Robert_Thompson97Lv15Robert_Thompson97

I really liked the story and it was going in the right direction but the MC got way too OP. Their existance value was just ridiculous! I dropped because at that point whats the point of the story but I wish you rewrite it! I dont mind and OP MC but it still has to be reasonable to work. She should not be able to beat Milim at all and only when shes nearing full potential shd she be able too

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