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Dark Hope

作者: Hiva_11
Magical Realism
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What is Dark Hope

WebNovel で公開されている、Hiva_11 の作者が書いた Dark Hope の小説を読んでください。This story about 15 year old boy capri. He is the one weak in magic and his life filled with mysterious, love, revenge, sister - brother bond, reincarnation. He possess lighting & Thunder magic powe...

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This story about 15 year old boy capri. He is the one weak in magic and his life filled with mysterious, love, revenge, sister - brother bond, reincarnation. He possess lighting & Thunder magic power. The world fullfill with magic, the magic everything to the world. There have a different types of magic level. Level 01 - Normal magic Level 02 - Super magic Level 03 - Ultimate magic Level 04 - Ellite magic (or) Dark magic Level 05 - God magic power Following Main Characters are Capri - Hero of this story Cancy- Capri Sister Joy - Capri father Jason & jerryna - capri close friend Hoody - jerryna father Yathri - senior guardian Sky - senior guardian

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Ever since her parents died in an accident Mu Tian Zi life has changed drastically. Her paternal Grandparents raise her but because of the interference of her uncle, it took a tumult in her life. She thought that her uncles family like her and took her as their own but she's wrong, they're just devil in human disguise. They uses her kindness against her and manage to ruin her reputation. Her grandparents on seeing this do there best to handle the rumours but still they can't. But as time passed bye new rumours spread again but this time her grandparents can't stop it so in order to protect her they sent her aboard. During her time aboard she found out the truth about her parents death. It's not because of accident but because someone killed them. From then on she'd vow that after coming back she's gonna avenge her parents death and herself for what they did. But on coming back her grandfather set out an arrange marriage for her with on of his old friend's grandson. She wanted to reject it but she had no other choice butt to accept it. But She didn't knew that this marriage will somehow lead her to have what she desire the most ie. family. ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ All Lu Xioatian ever wanted was for her family to care about her, love her and whatnot for them to trust her like they did for her twins sister but all she receive was disgust, hated look from them. She felt as if she has been stab by thousand needles from the look that they have given her. She still can't believe that they'll serve ties with her because they believe in this incident. Her own family didn't trust her. But she's not just gonna watch as those people chase her away. She's gonna come back for her angels and make those people suffer for what they did to her. She gonna make those people who wrong her to regret for disowning her. But she didn't understand why a certain someone always follows her and irritate her and begged for forgiveness. ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆☆☆☆☆☆ ☆ ☆ LET US JOIN THEIR JOURNEY TO GETHER ALONG WITH THEIR FRIENDS STAYED TUNE LOVE-------????

_Faith_1_23 · 都市
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17 Chs

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\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ Basic synopsis \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ What would you do if when you noticed you were in a white room, and a humanoid silhouette, apparently made of energy and that called itself god, welcomed you and said that you would be participating in a survival test against your will? \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ More information and Trivia \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ I am no writer, nor have i ever tried writing, this is my first experience with this kind of thing. However, i am a GM(game master) of D&D, Gurps and Story teller, and this story is actually based in a campaign i created, but was never able to finish, since me and my friends had to drop for many personal reasons. This book will contain game elements, however i will try to make the game system a lot transparent, with only some details, and i will only use the system as a guide since the campaign was based on it. The game was for Gurps(Generic and Universal Role Playing System) and you might notice some resemblance in the game system i will use. \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ BEWARE BEWARE \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ DANGER DANGER \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ SPOILERS AHEAD YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ Complete synopsis \\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\---------\\ Fox(MC) was thrown in a game by a been that called itself God, he and many other players now need to complete missions in order to survive. The first few chapters will be tutorial missions set to help the players adapt. The main arc will start when the tutorial ends and the first mission start. He might need many missions and years to finish one world or he might started a sub mission in a different plane or world before finishing the main one.

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lighting
lightingLv2lighting

Honestly man your story plot was interesting. I really like the joy and capri character. I think there more sereet about capri.Now i can add your story in my reading list.keep writing.

WWFire
WWFireLv4WWFire

One question, are you writing a novel or are you screenwriting? None of the chapters you write can be said as a "novel" or a "webnovel" per se. Please, please, please do a research on how to write a proper novel from the beginning: the dialogues, how to properly world build, how to write proper description, etc. Heck, read the top novel here and you will know that you don't actually write one. Okay, let's just say that screenwriting is your intention, your syntax and grammar is plain trainwreck: punctuation, too much use of ellipses, capitalization. I don't know why people gave you such high rating, this might be one of the worse novel I ever reviewed here. How dare you even use emojis just because you can't describe things. Last but not least, fix half-as*ed synopsis. Just seeing it makes wondered if you write this seriously or when you are drunk.

lynerparel
lynerparelLv14lynerparel

The story itself feels like it could be quite interesting, but since this, is a fantasy and it only has thirteen chapters there is so much more potential for the future characters making the story even more interesting. The Mc is likable which is a plus since I've been reading some questionable mc's is other stories.

Norah_Koch
Norah_KochLv5Norah_Koch

Interesting story with potential. I like the haunting tone. Mc is starting a new magical journey. I am hooked so far. Continue writing, author :)

Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

Story is interesting. I read only few chapters yet and it got me hooked. The only thing I want to suggest to author is that, if you add the synopsis then it will get easier for readers to choose your story. Because every story need a synopsis and I can't find any. Even if to keep the story a mystery , try to add something to let the readers know about story. Otherwise story is good. 😀👍

RandomGuy
RandomGuyLv4RandomGuy

Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work, author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too 😊 My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705

Empress_Ai
Empress_AiLv3Empress_Ai

I finish reading this one, the story is good but it do have a grammatical error which is not that bad. The chapter is not that much but overall it is awesome.. Keep up the good work and have a nice evening or day.. I don't know..

dark_Vision
dark_VisionLv3dark_Vision

Story plot was too good, Waiting for the true power of capri,Just need to improve the Grammatical error. Story until last episode Simply awesome.

mhhsolwei
mhhsolweiLv1mhhsolwei

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FallenButterfly
FallenButterflyLv10FallenButterfly

The story itself is quite interesting, it is still early stages of the story so there is still a lot of potential to grow and broaden. I don't usually read magical realism but you have a good story in mind. Just a suggestion, make your synopsis as though you are catching a fish with your hook because most readers rely on that :) Goodluck! Keep writing!

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