So this is going to be my first day in Silverstone High school. I've recently moved here and was only slightly nervous, but, in other terms, I was completely ready to get over this last year of high school.
I had all of the supplies I needed, and before school even started I had studied very hard to learn ahead of everyone. I've always been worried that I'm not good enough so I always try to do my best.
I havey own car that I drive to and from school and other places. Its a Tesla that I drive, I really wanted a good car when I was around thirteen and I've always stuck with it. I started working when I was thirteen so that I can save my money to buy the necessities in life when I got older. I gradually got better jobs while growing up.
I saved so much that I was actually able to almost buy the car straight up. I guess hard work does pay off.
Anyway, I walked into the school being prepared, hoping that my first day would go well. But as soon as I turned the corner, I bumped into this guy holding some textbooks. I was also carrying a textbook some folders and a binder so everything went everywhere. I said sorry because I didn't mean to bump into him but he gave me this cold look when I looked up at him and he said in a cold voice, "Watch where you're going".
I just gave him a sassy look and said "Well sorry, I don't know who put a stick up your butt, but you don't gotta be so rude to someone you don't even know."
He looked surprised, as if nobody has ever said that before. That's when I noticed that he had a snake bite on his lower left lip. (A ring on the lip) I complimented him saying "Nice snake bite." Again the surprised look. I quickly finished gathering my stuff that fell realizing that I was going to be late for class. Then I noticed everyone staring. I just thought to my self, "Strange, I wonder why everyone is looking at me?"
Cliffhangers rule right? Comment if you want to give me some tips. Also, do you like it about this length? Ordo you want me to make it longer?