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Comatose: Star Wars Fan Fiction

A small story in the Wolves of the Force timeline during the third year of the Clone Wars. Jedi Padawans Axle Tinguard and Ahsoka Tano crash land after nearly escaping an exploding Separatist flagship. When their escape pod smashes into the surface of an unknown foggy planet, both Padawans suffer serious injuries. On top of their dangerous situations, Axle and Ahsoka also face a new deep connection putting the Jedi code at risk. Now with no way to contact help and their wounds growing even more, Axle and Ahsoka must survive the dangerous planet.

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Evacuate

Ahsoka's POV

I walked around the street helping the civilians with carrying goods to their shed. It's the least I could do to repay them for rescuing Axle and I. I don't think we would have made it without them. At least I don't think I would have made it. Axle carried me for miles until he reached this village. He truly cares for me. It's so touching he would do whatever it takes to help me. I would do the same for him anytime.

After loading the last of the supplies in the shed, Axle ran around the corner of the street and stopped right in front of me panting. He grabbed my arm and casually pulled me over to a spot where no one was around. "We need to go." He said. I gave him a confused look. He looked behind himself, then back to me, "Ahsoka, it's Dooku. He's here. The Mayor is in league with him." I was stunned and my breathing increased rapidly, "W...What about the Krayt Dragon?" He shook his head, "It's a gigantic droid. The Mayor built it for Dooku. He wanted me to fight it to test its strength. The Mayor doesn't worship the Wolves of the Force. He lied to us. Dooku told him everything about us. That's how he knew who we were." I nodded, "You're right, we need to go. Now!"

Axle and I took off towards the gate. The soldiers that stood guard put their electro-staffs up to halt us. We force pushed them back into the wall behind them, then beat the rest of them to a pulp. We finally made it to the gate when I heard a dark voice behind us.

Axle's POV

"Tinguard, I am surprised you are fleeing. The highest ranking Jedi Masters on the Council hold you in such high regard, but I did not expect you to run so easily." It was Dooku. I clenched my fist, "How bout instead I trim that beard to an appropriate size. I'd be doing you a favor. You look like a hobo, Count." I could hear Ahsoka giggling behind me. I couldn't help but chuckle a little too. Dooku gave us a nasty look, then waved his hand. Several magna droids appeared behind him and charged us.

I grinned as Ahsoka and I ignited our sabers and went to town with the droids. They were fast, but we were faster. All four of our green sabers slashed at the purple electricity of the staffs. Some of the guards woke up from their nap Ahsoka and I put them in and started fighting us as well. We were vastly outnumbered, but that didn't really matter.

I finally had enough, "AHSOKA, GET DOWN!!!" I channeled the energy in my hand as a large bright glowing ball formed. I then corkscrewed and slammed the ball into the ground. The blast shook all around and smacked everyone in range. Ahsoka quickly hit the deck behind some wooden carts which were demolished. The droids were destroyed and the guards laid motionless on the ground. Dooku was too far for the blast to affect him. He just stood there and looked at us with a menacing face.

I ran over to Ahsoka and helped her up. "You couldn't have done that earlier?" She asked. I rolled my eyes, "But that would make it too easy. It's no fun when it's too easy." "Very impressive, Tinguard. However, I doubt you have the energy to stand up to my weapon." Dooku grinned as the ground shook and the gigantic Krayt Dragon droid shot up from the surface. I was too weak from the force light shock wave to fight. Ahsoka helped me regain balance. I looked back at the gate to see that it was knocked down from the blast. I nodded to Ahsoka and we ran as fast as we could away from the dragon.

It was right on top of us. Ahsoka and I force pulled one of the skyscraper trees down. The tree trunk snapped in half and crashed onto the giant droid. It screamed out in what sounded like agony. But it was a weaponized droid. Only the droids who are made with care are the ones who have true feelings. Ahsoka and I continued to run as fast as we could into the forest. What was surprising is that there was hardly and sand on the ground anymore. The ground was full of green moss and moist rocks. The trees had leaves on them too. Seasons must change here pretty fast. Dank ferik, what the hell is this place?

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Anakin's POV

"Master Windu with all do respect, your Padawan has been missing for almost two weeks now. Aren't you gonna help find him?" I asked very concerned. However, I was more pissed than concerned because Axle was out there and Windu wasn't looking for his Padawan. I'm just glad Ahsoka is there with him. They have each other and will protect each other.

Windu responded over the transmitter, "Skywalker, our forces are stretched thin. I have been trying to hold off the attacks on Velmore for as long as they have been missing. If I leave, we are going to lose an entire trade route." "Master, they need us now. I can feel them struggling. We have to find them, but I can't do it without your help. I don't care what the Council says. I don't even care what the Chancellor says. I'm going to find Axle and Ahsoka if it kills me. No one is going to stop me! The Jedi are supposed to protect people, but we also protect our own. That is YOUR Padawan out there. He needs you. He is depending on you to come."

Windu gave a long pause. He then sighed, "I know where they are." I was very surprised by that answer, "Y..You knew? This whole time? You knew this whole time where my Padawan and your Padawan are and didn't tell me?" "The information Axle and Ahsoka were assigned to retrieve had the coordinates of a top secret factory on the planet Corvus in Wild Space. It's almost impossible to find because of how Wild Space operates with hyperspace travel. That's why it has taken longer to locate them." I turned away from him, "No, the reason why we haven't found them yet is because you refused to give us this information. And because of you, our Padawans are lost deep in enemy territory." Windu looked down and placed his hand to his chin, "You're right, Skywalker. We protect our own. I'm transmitting the coordinates for Corvus. Bring them home." And with that, he ended the transmission

I got back on the controls, "He knew this whole time. DANK FERIK!!!" Rex looked at me, "Calm down, sir. We know where they are now. We'll have them aboard by this time tomorrow." I nodded, "But still, Windu doesn't even try to join in on the search. He just orders me to go get them like I'm going to go pick up dinner. It doesn't matter anyways. Let's get our friends back."