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Chosen of the Void

作者: Dhylec
Fantasy
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What is Chosen of the Void

WebNovel で公開されている、Dhylec の作者が書いた Chosen of the Void の小説を読んでください。If you had a single wish, what would you wish for? And what would you be willing to do to earn this wish?Join Vladmir as he tries his best to survive and come out on top of a game of life and death wh...

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If you had a single wish, what would you wish for? And what would you be willing to do to earn this wish? Join Vladmir as he tries his best to survive and come out on top of a game of life and death where the prize is no other them a wish, one that carries his hope for fixing the mistakes of his past, and maybe, the means for a life worth living. But the road that leads to the top is not paved only with great achievements. For one to be at the top he must pile the bodies of the other participants, and earn the favor of cruel Gods that demand to be entertained. Can one that turned his back to such Gods come out on top and fulfill his wish? Or is the cold embrace of the Void the only reward that awaits him?

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Dhylec
Dhylec作者Dhylec

For me, my novel will always be a 5 (If we don't believe in ourselves, who will?) But I know it's far from perfect. In fact, since English is not my native language, I know it is bound to have grammar mistakes, and the vocabulary will not be the richest one. That doesn't mean I will be complacent and let bad chapters be uploaded just for the sake of uploading. I am always trying to improve myself and my novel. So if you are so kind as to dedicate it a few minutes of your day, please let me a review telling me what you like about it and what I can improve. Thank you for reading my work.

Sir_Killington
Sir_KillingtonLv10Sir_Killington

Overall, very nice, defined character personalities and emotions. What really stood out was the "Death Game" premise. I'm an indulger of a little Korean show called the Squid Games, so I love stuff like this! There's also a good use of "twisty" story telling that'll keep you guessing on what comes next. For my suggestions on improvement, I'd definitely focus on improving sentence structure, leading into word choice. Other than that, good read!

Theonedifferent
TheonedifferentLv4Theonedifferent

Seems like a story, stability of updates is alright and quality is also pretty. good, its just to early to go to details since only 5 chapters have been released.

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