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Beginning in an Obscure White

作者: Shin_Nagami
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Chapter 15 Words

In some forest there is a tree with light brown wood and dark green leaves that has a wooden cocoon - the same wood as the trunk and the branches of the tree. Inside the cocoon you can see a small sphere of white energy with several blue particles entering the white body.

For each particle that entered the body, it grew in size - not visibly by human eyes.

As the small sphere constantly increased in size, inside it, there was a soul arguing with some sort of screen. The soul had the shape of a human man without details, possessing only the shape and a mouth. The screen was semi-transparent, with a white background and dark letters.

"Aren't you supposed to be the cheat system that would help me grow?" The soul asked with a tone of curiosity and calmness.

[*I do not possess such an ability yet.

As said before, master, choose 5 words for the system to suit your personal desire.

Reminder: choose wisely, for they will define how the system.*]

"System, could you call me something else?" The soul asked because it felt uncomfortable for some reason.

[*Do you wish to be called host?*]

Soul: {Are you kidding me? No... the system must not even know Greek mythology. So I shouldn't be angry.}

"No, and you can have 'master'." The soul responded in a serious and calm tone.

[*Understood, master.*]

Soul: {Forgetting that, what would be the 5 words I should use to define what I want in my life? Or rather, what I want to be like? Or, what I want the system to be?}

The soul wondered how it should choose these words, as it would decide its path forward. That way, at one point, an idea came to me, "Why don't I base it on strengths of the characters and stories?"

Alma: {What do I like about the characters in novels, manga and manhwa? If someone were to ask me, I would answer their ability to stay all the time. Maybe, their power or adaptability, but I don't think that would be what is endearing and rather their ability to evolve as a character beyond their power.}

"System, note evolution as the first word." The soul told about the first word chosen so as not to forget it later.

[*Understood, master.*]

[*Creating annotation function... completed*]

[*Words:

1- Evolution.

2- (empty).

3- (empty).

4- (empty).

5- (empty).*]

Alma: {So since the system is blank it can create functions just by my wanting it? That's cool, I better try something like that in the future since the system will change after the 5 words... thinking about it, what makes the protagonists and some villains so strong? Like, there are other characters that evolve equally with them or even faster, but suddenly they can no longer keep up with them as if they have reached their limits. This is a sad thing to think about, but it really is an injustice to the others. They are literally an exception in creation and seem to have no limits. Wait... unlimited and exception can be the next words!}

"System, note unlimited and exception."

[*Understood, master.*]

[*Words:

1- Evolution.

2- Unlimited.

3- Exception.

4- (empty).

5- (empty).*]

Soul: {Only two words left and I can already think of how I'm going to be invincible at this point, but I'm still missing something...something I'm currently lacking. Maybe, I need ambition to move forward! That's it! Ambition is my penultimate chosen word.}

"System, note ambition as the fourth."

[*Understood, master.*]

[*Words:

1- Evolution.

2- Unlimited.

3- Exception.

4- Ambition.

5- (empty).*]

Soul: {Evolution, unlimited, exception, and ambition. I don't regret having the chosen ones, but I need something that allows me to not be tied to others or the world. What I need is freedom. After all, without it, I will be bound to something for carrying such strength.}

"The last word is freedom."

[*Warning: the system will go into hibernation to speed up the system adaptation process.

Words:

1- Evolution.

2- Unlimited.

3- Exception.

4- Ambition.

5- Freedom.*]

[*Warning: the master will go into hibernation to port the system and accelerate the formation of his physical body*]

"sto..."

As the warnings fell, a soul and mystery suddenly rested to transform.

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