It took me two days to read everything to finally do my review, the first 30 ch were extremely difficult to force myself to read. the comedy, the lack of seriousness, the lack of use of magic that could end everything, made me want to stop reading, the forced use of an axe, which literally blinds all the deadliest possible uses of his magic was something that almost put me off. Only Telekinesis has the potential to be the most deadly of all, the use of stones instead of spear pints, daggers, weapons, etc. just to use a weapon, the lack of use of the stone control, I feel that these things are the most stopping people from reading.
Now another point that is quite unpleasant, is how easy it is to give power to others, without any contingency or anything, especially the minions, I understand giving equipment, enchanted weapons, but power is a no no.
Experiments with alterations is something totally redundant, my friend, you are facing an apocalyptic problem, first improve yourself and then think about the rest, besides, all the projects would take years if not decades to mature, you are focusing on unnecessary things.
You are creating a dependency that prevents it from continuing to grow, honestly I have many more points that if you want to talk about it, you can tell me where you want.
But at the end of my whole review, I can honestly tell you that you have incredible potential, your writing has improved immensely, even your views on morality (which I'll be honest is still a bit beta).
I would be happy to help you for free how to use your ideas a little more logically without altering your plot.
