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Alpha Tate

作者: K_Elizabeth
Fantasy Romance
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What is Alpha Tate

WebNovel で公開されている、K_Elizabeth の作者が書いた Alpha Tate の小説を読んでください。Tate is back.... The alphas prodigal son has returned after four years. What happens when he isn't the same? What happened to him in the Southern pack? Four years he has been gone. He knew he ...

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Tate is back.... The alphas prodigal son has returned after four years. What happens when he isn't the same? What happened to him in the Southern pack? Four years he has been gone. He knew he shouldn't have left her like that, but he needed to become the Alpha his pack needed when is father eventually stepped down and couldn't become that when she was around. He never could concentrate when it comes to her.. His little menace. Evelyn- Dreading the day... No....counting down the days until she would have to face him again. He left her, she survived and moved on or so she thought. Why can't I just let him go once and for all.. what is he hiding?

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The start is not much engaging but as the story goes it keeps improving. I think the as the author keeps updating the story can become much greater.

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Hello! Here's an honest review. Writing Quality- I can see that you were trying to be as descriptive as possible in all of the scenes, but what's more important is to give readers something to feel. Try writing how the characters feel what they're feeling. Besides that, you are missing some commas, periods, and stuff. Try and edit your drafts (and already published chapters) to the best that you can since there are a lot of errors. Besides that, I can still imagine the scenes taking place, but it wasn't fluid so it didn't catch my attention. Story Development- It's the usual romance stuff and with mates, but I like it. Character Design- I like that the mc is trying to be independent, but they are pretty 2-dimensional. World Background- No need to comment on this since it looks to be set in the real world and the rules of the plot are clearly stated, so good job! Overall, improvement in writing quality- and the story will become much better because the readers would understand it a lot more.

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