Abandoned Empress [BL] DISCONTINUED

If it was not apparent before, or if the ending of the synopsis was not noted, this story was inspired by “Remarried Empress.” Inspired, not basalt plagiarized or copy-and-paste as one reviewer eluded. Similar situations were used to present the antagonist and protagonist— but there are divergences and the story will continue to evolve to its own. This is a gratuitous side-project at best to keep myself from falling into a slump while working on an original peace on Wattpad — which I’ll be frank, is a world of issues. Writing is definitely not a feasible career path for me lol but I enjoy it. Anyway, character development is slow — I’m working on something’s that I do not like and trying to flesh them out more, so a re-vamp is in the future. The world building aspect of this story is predominantly inspired by my original WIP — but less heavy on the Slavic folklore. Is this information relevant? No, but you might have been curious. Everything is slow paced, from working out details in character behavior, to environment to chapter schedules. I’m trying to keep a standard pace, it’s somewhat working out, but not exactly.

The story is really well put together, and makes a person excited for the next update. Enjoyed reading it and makes me wonder what will happen as the story progress.

I liked this book so much!! The protagonist is not a little delicate flower(well he is but at least have some thorns hehe), however what i liked the most was when he reply that hypocrite emperor and his scum, The feeling when he do this is so much gratifying (꒡ꜙ꒡).

I really like how everything in this story is headed so far! The main character is being treated like a villain at times, but he can be delicate and vulnerable. When I think of the pain he is going through I feel so sad and angry for him! I really hope he gets a happy ending and the female character gets what she deserves!

This story is an amazing story so far despite the one chapter. It leaves me wondering what will happen further down the road as the story progress. Keep up the great work!

Hello everyone! The author here with a short review of my own. Honestly, this story is a continuous work in progress. I’m not too pleased with the quality of my writing or how my characters are developed. Its a very good possibility that I will go back and revamp this story once its been finished because i believe it can be better. Poor writing quality aside, the update is unstable and needs a great deal of work, so bear with me while I figure everything out. For those who enjoy this story even though it can be much better, thank you for the continued support. I will do better to not disappoint!

This story is very engaging and despite it's few chapters I am hocked, unlike many other stories where the main character get's replaced by another woman who seduces their husband the girl isn't totally evil (though she isn't the nicest person either)which I believe makes the story more interesting.

Honestly this is so good and so sad, Its like those novels where the empress is bad but from the perspective of the empress and it really makes you see how much of a scum the emperor is.

Although I had a feeling this was going to happen, it’s upsetting to see the big discontinued sign. This book had a lot of potential, already loving the characters, the plot and world background even though the story just began. I just want to say writer if you ever see this, you can stop writing the book, sure, but don’t give up on writing. The way you wrote was just so good? Idk how to describe it. What I’m saying is you have a lot of potential and tho I’m sad to see this story go, it’ll be too cruel for the author to continue write a book they no longer have any passion/ care? for. (I really loved the main character)

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I have to say that I have not read many BL stories even though I like them. Yours seemed different from the start as you chose to start with a moment in the future and work your way up. Except for some edits here and there, I have nothing to comment about the writing quality. The characters are way more likeable to me than I expected in the beginning and they are well designed as well. The author seems to have planned the plot well as I found it very interesting. I am waiting for more updates. Nice work, author!

I only read a few BL novels and other BL stuff so I don't know what to compare but when I read this I like the story. Would read more chaps about it so please keep up publishing your works in the future!

I've read the chapters available so far. I'll say that I am no fan of BL, but I don't rule them out of my reading just because of that. However, everything sounds new to me for this reason. The main character is, as for the title, an abandoned Empress. The story starts with a huge spoiler that tells you how is it going to end, and then it jumps back to how it started. It's an interesting choice, and it doesn't happen often here on webnovel. I actually liked it. The ML is a total jerk (which is fine for a fictional character, this is a constatation and not critics; we all like villains, don't we?). I can't understand the change he had 'overnight'. He's either incoherent, or something happened during the jouney... But it doesn't change the fact that he souldn't treat the MC like that. The only suggestion I can give you is to try improving the grammar, the rest is super!