A Saiyan Owl

This has been a trip, for me it was a long learning Experience in Building World Lore as well getting a better grasp over English. At the end of the day I'm still a shameless Author/Artist like many, but I can't help but love what I created and had fun writing, so who cares? I made this story's MC(Mumei) to be fun to read and write, so if I ever felt like reading it I would laugh at it again similar to when I was writing, so like the Synopsis says. A MC who likes to play around most of the time but has her own twists and problems to solve along her journey. That's this Owl of mine's story.

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it's a good story if i say.... because i'am a fan of Hololive i gave you all the star i have. >w<)/

I like it so far it isn't like other dragon ball fic where the mc basically born with 100k power but can still but damaged by conventional means in this they are still relatively weak but they are about as strong as goku when the saiyan saga arc happens I also got into vtuber cuz of this anyways the plot is good and I don't think this novel has some weird cultivation novel villains and stuff good book :)

Started great then turned into a acid trip. Great idea that fell into a crack-fic hole. Real shame. Almost feels like dbz fused with a failed attempt at a gamer forced into the whacky races.

For the most part, this is a great story so far! It's well written, and the pace is more than adequate in my eyes. The MC may rapidly grow in power, but that's expected honestly, and to her credit, the MC is trying not to go out of her way to power up to fast. Her love for fighting is keeping the power creep down (For now :3).

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Read this with mummei voice Marvelous .

I forgot to leave this here.. My bad! Take these 5's and a High 5!

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Haven’t Really read the story (and I’ll Probably Won’t Since I’m Not a huge fan of Hololive) but I’ll Give it 5 star only because The author is nice. Hope people find your fanfic and enjoy it

Started off very good, but like 30 chapters in the quality drops off a ton and it turns into mindless rambling. It is like it started as a nice slice of life, but each chapter the author took a bite from the slice until they ended up just rambling aimlessly

My name is ralon bacalskiy and I LOVE this book and all its "suggestive content" ;) and i just want to say to ReyKale you go girl. BUT the world background is UUUUm ok i guess um pretty tubular - Ralon Bacalskiy

man, this is so chaotic got me cracking with laughing fits constantly sheeeeeesh

love this it's so fun huh[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

I loved this story and and starting to reread it again. I hope that people are not discouraged from reading this because of the lower end of rating.

Good story, love Hololive. Love Mumei. Love Kroni. Love KronMei. Love KronFau. Love FauMei. Love KronMeiFau(??? I wrote this right?). Love lilies.(>_<). And How much i love you'r ART! More Drip for Mumei!

Well, second review: First of all, the grammar has improved drastically and it's actually readable. There are still some errors but nobody is perfect. This story still isn't for me as I have tried it several times because I was bored but I still think that it is a interesting concept. MC is extremely talented but doesn't want to train before Freeza because idk (forgot the reason, it was mentioned somewhere) and because of her the original characters train more and are stronger. Yeah that's about it, like I said I don't get far when I try to read this but it could be intersting for other people.

it's GLORIOUS Fantastic Marvelous even.