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Irgendwe
IrgendweLv41yr
2022-12-30 04:33

Well, second review: First of all, the grammar has improved drastically and it's actually readable. There are still some errors but nobody is perfect. This story still isn't for me as I have tried it several times because I was bored but I still think that it is a interesting concept. MC is extremely talented but doesn't want to train before Freeza because idk (forgot the reason, it was mentioned somewhere) and because of her the original characters train more and are stronger. Yeah that's about it, like I said I don't get far when I try to read this but it could be intersting for other people.

A Saiyan Owl

ReyKale
4.5
102 Chs

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Irgendwe
IrgendweLv4

and yes, there is a system but it's not a generic one, it has it's own personality and is more like a partner.

1yr
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ReyKale
ReyKaleAuthor

This has been a trip, for me it was a long learning Experience in Building World Lore as well getting a better grasp over English. At the end of the day I'm still a shameless Author/Artist like many, but I can't help but love what I created and had fun writing, so who cares? I made this story's MC(Mumei) to be fun to read and write, so if I ever felt like reading it I would laugh at it again similar to when I was writing, so like the Synopsis says. A MC who likes to play around most of the time but has her own twists and problems to solve along her journey. That's this Owl of mine's story.

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ReyKale
ReyKaleAuthor

Reveal spoiler

2yr
CZ2128_D
CZ2128_DLv12

it's a good story if i say.... because i'am a fan of Hololive i gave you all the star i have. >w<)/

2yr
John_Ryan_8278
John_Ryan_8278Lv12

I like it so far it isn't like other dragon ball fic where the mc basically born with 100k power but can still but damaged by conventional means in this they are still relatively weak but they are about as strong as goku when the saiyan saga arc happens I also got into vtuber cuz of this anyways the plot is good and I don't think this novel has some weird cultivation novel villains and stuff good book :)

2yr
Mikaruya
MikaruyaLv2

Started great then turned into a acid trip. Great idea that fell into a crack-fic hole. Real shame. Almost feels like dbz fused with a failed attempt at a gamer forced into the whacky races.

2yr
Lilith_Zenon
Lilith_ZenonLv2

For the most part, this is a great story so far! It's well written, and the pace is more than adequate in my eyes. The MC may rapidly grow in power, but that's expected honestly, and to her credit, the MC is trying not to go out of her way to power up to fast. Her love for fighting is keeping the power creep down (For now :3).

1yr
KuroNoah
KuroNoahLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Luddic_Path
Luddic_PathLv4

Read this with mummei voice Marvelous .

1yr
Saeko_Kaburagi
Saeko_KaburagiLv14

I forgot to leave this here.. My bad! Take these 5's and a High 5!

1yr
Griffin138
Griffin138Lv4

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