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A Reason to Live -Naruto

作者: Leaf_noamd
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Kaito Habiki embraces his new identity in an all too familiar world, a world that he has watched and read every single week; Naruto. Thrown into the world for no apparent reason, or so he thought. He does everything he can to reach his goal, to go back to where he truly belongs. First time writing so please tell me if there are any spelling mistakes or any grammar mistakes, as well as mistakes related to the plot. This is a Fan-fiction and I don't own any of the characters from Naruto except for Kaito Habiki and any characters I might add.

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  • テキストの品質
  • リリース頻度安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界観設定
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Leaf_noamd
Leaf_noamd作者Leaf_noamd

I know this story might not be for everyone since my updating schedule will not be very consistent. I would like to address a few concerns I think that readers might have: 1. No harem. 2. There will be romance, though I still don't know who the FL is. 3. Mostly slow-paced, but there will be time skips during training arcs once the training methods are established. 4. It will take a few chapters to flesh out the original characters since I have to make them blend into a world where characters have so much depth. And to those still reading despite the inconsistent update schedule, I sincerely thank you.

MrSheta
MrShetaLv10MrSheta

What happens to that personality? It's stressfully irritating, you don't feel like reading a lot watching a mc who cries about everything, worries about everything...

Alpha_Idiot
Alpha_IdiotLv4Alpha_Idiot

It is too soon to say how good this story is. But for the four Chapters I read I can say that Grammer is ok. There are some mistales here and there but overall ok. The Parents till now are too flat. They have no personalaty and the conversations with them is kind of forced. MC's mindset is understandable amd rushed at the sams time, so I have to wait for more character development. I'm very interested in his way of chakra training with his meager reserve, because it very from story to story. (I hope it is with chakra strings, because they do not cost that much, trains his hands for handseals and cordination,are perfect to learn control and are a good offense and defence in the "early game"with elemental transformation even later on.)

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