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A New Dawn [Paused for now]

作者: Innovation
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What is A New Dawn [Paused for now]

WebNovel で公開されている、Innovation の作者が書いた A New Dawn [Paused for now] の小説を読んでください。Leilade lives a pretty simple life. As a commander inside the demon army and one of their greatest mages, she only has to deal with logistic problems and not really need to fight at all. But when the ...

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Leilade lives a pretty simple life. As a commander inside the demon army and one of their greatest mages, she only has to deal with logistic problems and not really need to fight at all. But when the race opposing them manages to assemble something they shouldn't have, the life of Leilade is ruined. By a miracle, she and some demons survived, only to find out that they are not on the same planet anymore. Weak, inside a world not viable for their survival, they will have to choose their next actions carefully. Will they destroy this world, or capture it, by force or by wits? Because everything is not as peaceful as it seems. Average words by chapter: ~1.8k words. Average chapter rate: 4/week. Potential of becoming premium: none. Potential of staying free forever: a certainty. Potential of being dropped: never (unlike a Rattling Monster that was not even meant to last that long).

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Overturning Fate (~A Journey of a Lifetime~)

~~Personal Tags~~(currently on hiatus) #Weak_to_strong #Magic_world #Demi-human mc -------------------------------++------------------------------ A journey always started with a single step but as you step further and further never-ending tides will push against you, stopping and straying you from your path. Those who push against the tide with all of their might and will walk in the path of the strong. Those who played the tides and making it push you further with their mind and thought is the path of the wise. Only those who walked both paths will truly become a legend, walking a path they have taken with no regrets. Join Valin journey. A journey that will last for a lifetime yet most will never treads. "I shall overturn fate if it's against me." -------------------------------++--------------------------------- Hello, the author here. this is technically my first real novel. I'm not a native in English (but I'm quite great at it) and I'm using Grammarly keyboard and whatever knowledge of English I have to type in my phone lol. I'm editing this my self+grammarly so don't expect a truly high-quality novel (also because writing novel mobile is 10x harder than on a computer) but at least try reading before anyone judges me lol. P.s. if you like what you see pls support this novel by giving comments, rating, review, and power stones. , the most important thing is for you guys to enjoy~. Novel cover copyright is not my own pls comment on my latest chapter if you(owner of the picture) want to take it down.

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20 Chs
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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :A seed of evil in the garden
2 :In a fertile land where the dead will walk and the demons rise
3 :Good intentions crumbled as greed arised
4 :An Ominous Tomb Is All They Have Seen
5 :The Shadows are Coming to Life
6 :Time? Is it really that time?

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Innovation
Innovation作者Innovation

Here we are for a wonderful new adventure. This novel will be a lot more serious than the previous one and in a Thrid Person View. It will be a influenced mainly by Overlord (Ainz Ooal Gown) and The Riftwar Cycle (Pug the magician). First major point, no Harem, second major point, no Harem. I despise, hate and am disgusted by anything related to that thing. First of all, I am incapable of creating a good one and then I always find that romance in novel are utter garbage in general. So no such thing. First real point, the loli MC, well, don't worry nothing illegal will happen. It's just that, I tried to read some female MC novels and they are weird. Meaning that a handsome male lead will appear and the "cold blooded assassin from the 21th century" will inevitably fall in love with him. So don't expect any of thoses things like love or passion. As for the world building, I love WH, so this time it will just be a little more subtle (forget the necrontyr at the beginning). But we will have a lot of races, more real undead this time, more everything. No System, it's a cheap tool that provokes a lot of problems and a huge headache with the numbers, levels, spells, it's a nightmare. As for Update, I would say 4chapters/week bare minimum. Will probably be more, but i won't promise something that I can't achieve. And last thing, don't forget to write the tag for the novel and post any error that you find in the comments. Thank you in advance for that.

Daoist_KanQi
Daoist_KanQiLv12Daoist_KanQi

Hahaha....Please write more, Mr. Innovation... Looking forward to your next novel... Hope that it will be at least as good as the previous one.... Hahahha......

ELord
ELordLv5ELord

Just to ruin your 1 star review!!! hahahaha! Can you add some tags to this novel, especially whether its harem or not? As i am a harem hater

Nobodshy
NobodshyLv5Nobodshy

From the author of "A Rattling Monster" finally comes another book. So far all good. World got a proper introduction as well as the characters. Writing quality good as well, maybe some minor mistakes here and there but every book have them so no complaining (it's much worse in most cases anyway...). I can't really say anymore since it's really just the beginning and some world building so far. To all who see this review... Give this one a try and while you're at it to A Rattling Monster too. P.S. yes-YESSSSSSSSSS a-another word thingy f-from Innovation manthing. The Great Horned Rat will be pl-pleased!!! YES! YES!!!!!

TonioG04
TonioG04Lv13TonioG04

Please continue writing, it sounds really good, but I don't wanna get addicted to an book that may never be finished😢

K9330
K9330Lv5K9330

In my opinion this novel is one of the very few that are worth reading on this site. As it feels original and well written, both of which are rare over here.

Hillhigas
HillhigasLv13Hillhigas

Moar rattling moar evolution less pain on the grubelnuts whit unfinished stuff and cuality dince id rather wait than have another Naruto btw ill change the score when you do

Krindsr
KrindsrLv13Krindsr

so frustrating that novels like this get abandoned while the haremslop that is ever so popular thrives xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Landon_Sorenson
Landon_SorensonLv4Landon_Sorenson

This story is one of the few gems among gems that you should want to read. I will be frank it will be very slow in the beginning it may seem pointless it may seem annoying and it may feel just wrong with how slow it was going... but it is important, because of the character development,the world building,and future setup it is all worth it to read. Plus who doesn’t love a good Warhammer story?

Landon_Sorenson
Landon_SorensonLv4Landon_Sorenson

All I can say is i fuckin love your writing ignore the swear just.... I feel not enough people have seen your Writing and it just bothers me so much I mean such skill... the amount of just ah ok for example the rattling monster it was a system ok sure the start up was... slow so many people disliked and wrote reviews and just saying another plain system story but I stayed and... oh my if only every story was like yours just it brings me happiness to read stuff like this I’ve started to donate every day to you well vote power stones just respect man until I find someone better at writing (which I doubt will happen) I shall keep voting well.... unless I don’t got internet but please keep your writing up it’s just the best here........

bryang
bryangLv4bryang

A slow start but after about chapter ten the story becomes very good. I recommend giving it a chance.................................................

KieraRz
KieraRzLv4KieraRz

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dezanos
dezanosLv13dezanos

Great novel with intelligent and "evil" mc. It is logical and as far as i can see is no plot armor. The mc and the people on her side are op but due to certain circumstances unable to use their full power (not sealed or anything, but because they want to) the reason is pretty logical and it doesn't change the fact that they are op. The world building is great and iam quite curious how the story will develop further. The writing is pretty good as long as iam concerned even though iam no native speaker. I couldn't find any errors

Netherwolf
NetherwolfLv5Netherwolf

Since i like the last one, I will give you a five star in advance and comment on the novel later. Stay tuneddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

crimsonking
crimsonkingLv11crimsonking

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