A Nap Leads to the Future?!

I love this book alot the story is well written. Its leaves me wanting more after i finish the current chapter. I get put into a bit of a show whole after the chapters and wanting mo ore

I loved the story so much, I binge-read all the chapters available last night. I just couldn't stop hahaha. The world building is amazing, I enjoy the interaction between the characters, and the story development is steady and intriguing. I like the writing style and I am looking forward to more chapters. Great work Author!

I'd be honest, I wasn't expecting something this good. The synopsis didn't impress me very much. I'm not saying it was bad, just not fitting to my personal taste. But now that I have read a considerable amount of chapters, I can safely say that this book way defies my expectations. The story is pretty good and is complimented by good character dynamics. To be honest, just off what I've read, I wouldn't classify any single character as great but their interactions with each other won me over. I'm definitely planning to keep reading this story and wish the author very best on the endeavor of continuing to create it.

The story jumps right into action! Fast-paced, emotions are well described! Well, I can feel them! I will come back for another review, after reading a few more chapters! 😉😉😉😉😉✌🏻

Upon reading half of the chapters available here, I found out that this novel was a very interesting one. I was never bored in every chapter I went through and always looking forward to read the next one. You're amazing, dear author! Please keep up the good job that you are doing and I expect to read more. Thank you so much!!! 😘😘😘

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Have read the first five chapters annd it's great so far, the writing is very discriptive and intresting right form the start, it starts staright away the story is well paced leading to one mystrey after the other. You really feel the main charecters panic at the begnning in her strange situation. And theres question to be asked just in the first chapter

Adorable main character! She has powers! Reading about what she does, thinks, and says is enjoyable! Backstory is introduced well, is well-organized, easy to read, complex enough to be interesting, while simple enough to be memorable. Grammar and action-sequencing is excellent! We're building up in the first several chapters, and I have no idea where we're going, but it should be quite fun! Looking forward to more, Author!

With great vigour and enthusiasm, the author presents us with a story that proves to its reader that she has a humorous way of telling a story. The tale is much like its protagonist both charming and entertaining, with a heavy dose of originality mixed into it. The overall grammar is decent with the occasional fault, but these are rare and only seldom disturb the flow of the story. Regarding the rhythm and dialogue, I found it somewhat lacking, but I do sense some progress towards more recent chapters. Overall, I find this an energetic and entertaining read that certainly deserves to be praised. I greatly appreciated reading it and applaud your work.

Really the kind of work I like to read. Fantastical, filled with originality and with characters I love! This is the kind of work you need to read through at least the first two chapters of because it would be very sad if people out there who would similarly love this piece give up too early before becoming fully hooked!

Strongly recommended!! There are a lot of twist that made me stunned in this novel. I can see a LOT of potential. I like the author way of narrating and the characters are well portrayed. Made me laugh sometimes ^^ I will continue to read this novel since the plot was really good. Good job author sama!

Ill start off by saying that the story is great. I love the light comedy and the MC, the story itself hasn't revealed an obvious plot yet but what is there is well written, good job. The only thing I can think of for the writing itself is that you use some words and phrases repetitively. Its not so often that its bad but it is often enough that I feel like it would be better if you tried to substitute other words in. Besides that one thing I personally really liked the main character that was introduced at the beginning and I feel like what happened in chapters 3 and 4 could have been summed up more so as to get back to the original MC sense they didn't explain a whole lot and felt really like all they did was introduce some other characters.

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This story if you want to be invested in characters will definitely hold your interest as it's especially entertaining to see character interactions. The world-building is good and I'm looking forward to seeing more of the story.

I just read the first chapter. The synopsis does not give away anything. But the action begins from the first chapter itself. Writing quality us good, stability of updates is equally good as many chapters are there to be read. Story is developing nicely with an element of expectation of what next. The character design at present is of just one character and seems to be well done. World background will also prove to be equally good. I am saving this novel to my library to read at leisure. All the best.

The synopsis itself was enough to intrigue me, and I found the plotline to be genuinely interesting. The writing style was understandable as well. Good job with it!