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A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

作者: NOOBwriter69
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What is A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

WebNovel で公開されている、NOOBwriter69 の作者が書いた A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter) の小説を読んでください。Waking up as Sirius Black before his prison escape,let's see how the MC tackles his obstacles toward a good life while also trying to stay alive. And why is Harry Potter now Rose Potter?!Schedule 2/w...

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Waking up as Sirius Black before his prison escape, let's see how the MC tackles his obstacles toward a good life while also trying to stay alive. And why is Harry Potter now Rose Potter?! Schedule 2/week ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you want to read extra chapters or support me, you can do so by joining my Patreon patreon.com/fanficswrittenbyme25 `````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` Warning: Hogwarts is going to start 18 A lot of smut (will be 18+) I own nothing. All of the of belongs to JK rowlings.

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chance_isaac
chance_isaacLv14chance_isaac

Author ruins the story immediately by making hogwarts start at 18. Then he just has sirius do rituals that apparently no one else ever did, just so he could be the male fantasy. “Adonis” appearance super soldier with enhanced “stamina”. Then another to make him only under dumbles and voldy in terms of magical ability. Just lazy writing for a power fantasy harem. The lemons was written well tho.

Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4Miki_Marlo75

so far the best Sirius black story on this page is developing well it focuses on the mc not like others that go straight to Harry after one chapter and leave the mc aside almost at the beginning of the story

SacredSilence
SacredSilenceLv11SacredSilence

Overall I found it boring. Sirius method to gaining power was simplistic and cliche, and the logic behind explanations is lacking. The story was bland and everything came to Sirius very easily, so far there was no struggle.

0DarkWolf0
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reaper_of_lewdsect
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so will rise potter have to deal with the dursleys till she's 18 I'm confused based on your synopsis

Emperio
EmperioLv13Emperio

the story is incredible so far and I expect a lot from it given the current quality <3 ( google translat sorry for my english ) good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ray_02
Ray_02Lv4Ray_02

Update please , you're killing me with anticipation.

Darkiling
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Logi_cal
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Just take these five stars author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Ray_02
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amazing, cant wait for more, update faster though.

Darkiling
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Sheptshept
SheptsheptLv1Sheptshept

Voy a ser sincero es un asco de fanfic la historia no tiene sentido en muchas maneras da cringe en todos los capítulos no es que sea mala historia es que está mal narrada con muchos pero muchos agujeros en la historia y para cualquiera que diga que no tengo razón y bla bla bla leí hasta el capítulo 25 y aún no se pone buena lamento haber desperdiciado tiempo leer esto y si eres nuevo y quieres una reseña buena la mía no lo es pero algo cuenta aunque no creo que dure mucho ya que algunos autores borran o denuncian reseñas cómo estás para que no les afecte en el futuro y si se que el autor es nuevo y bla bla bla o eso dice pero la verdad es que no nos importa ya que está historia está reescritaaa

GldnApplImortality
GldnApplImortalityLv15GldnApplImortality

FINALLY!!!!!! A FF where Bellatrix gets the D! Bellatrix is Bae, then comes fleur, then luna. But most of all its a good read. props to you author for dicking down Bellatrix. GOD finally. I was tired of all the lovegood and Hermione ships. need more Bellatrix and Fleur.

Youknowme
YouknowmeLv10Youknowme

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Darkiling
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Nathan_Golder
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the story is boring, slow and full of all sorts of ridiculous made up cliche nonsense, just to railroad the plot.

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It's good from what I've read so far but there's a lot of spelling errors. To errors when it comes to Sirius's animagus form that is a dog not a Grimm. Also family tree errors Bellatrix, Narcissa, and Andromeda are his cousins not his sisters.

Darkiling
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Jetboy76
Jetboy76Lv15Jetboy76

Amazing novel so far I was wondering if the MC will have a Harem?

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