Item: A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)
Rating: 1.6
Author: Sheptshept

SheptsheptLv11yr

2023-04-23 03:25

Voy a ser sincero es un asco de fanfic la historia no tiene sentido en muchas maneras da cringe en todos los capítulos no es que sea mala historia es que está mal narrada con muchos pero muchos agujeros en la historia y para cualquiera que diga que no tengo razón y bla bla bla leí hasta el capítulo 25 y aún no se pone buena lamento haber desperdiciado tiempo leer esto y si eres nuevo y quieres una reseña buena la mía no lo es pero algo cuenta aunque no creo que dure mucho ya que algunos autores borran o denuncian reseñas cómo estás para que no les afecte en el futuro y si se que el autor es nuevo y bla bla bla o eso dice pero la verdad es que no nos importa ya que está historia está reescritaaa

A Mercenary waking up as Sirius Black(HP SI) (Harry Potter)

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