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A godly Reincarnation:Marvel(Completed)

作者: TheGodSage
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Given a Chance to be reincarnated by The one above all As a mutant in the Marvel Universe, Elekto or Eli for short is given wishes and reincarnates in the age of the God's in Marvel Not a harem fic, too lazy to remove the tags xD, I'll do it later... maybe Hope you enjoy

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Chapter 1Getting Reincarnated

WAIT!!!! BEFORE YOU GO FORWARD... KNOW THAT THIS... OH CAPS IS STILL ON

*Ruffling sounds*

Ok, Know that this was my first story pretty much... so don't expect too much... I think it's ok... for my first at least... but still... don't expect too much

Author Out✌

-April 13, 2021

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*Beep* *Beep* *Beep* The sound of an Alarm clock goes off and a blonde girl wakes up

" Ahh Eli that was great last night..." She waits for Eli's Reply but it doesn't come

She turns to face him " Hey Eli" She starts shaking him " Eli!!" She scream's as she feels that he doesn't have a pulse

She grabs her phone and calls the cops " Hello yes My boyfriend won't wake up and he doesn't have a pulse please hurry" She says and waits for them to come

*A few weeks later*

A blonde Girl can be seen crying in a chair as Other people leave the funeral of Eli

" Why'd you have to go" She says through sobs " No Eli wouldn't want me to cry, He'd probably say something like * Stop crying and do something productive*"

She stands up and leaves with a determined face

*A few hours later*

An old man with glasses and a grey mustache walks up to the now buried Coffin

" Haha I heard everytime you prayed to go to marvel so I will give you that wish" He says and vanishes

*In the void*

" W-What the hell... did I die During Sex!!!... Well I guess I can't complain, Sorry bree..."

As the soul lays there a few minutes pass before he sees a bright light and His favorite celebrity walks out

" Stan Lee!!"

" Well yes But actually no... I am one above all..."

(One above all?... Like Marvel!!!)

" Haha yes like marvel and When I was in your dimension I heard all your wishes to go into marvel so here I am to reincarnate you"

" Wait why??? I don't think I ever did anything special"

Stan just looks " Because of your death your girlfriend bree became determined to help other people avoid any kind of loss... She cured cancer at the age of 45 and Covid-19 at the age of 50... She died at the age of 105 and never married always keeping you in her memory..."

I let a tear fall down my non existant cheek " That's nice... What happened to her after that?"

"Haha she's living another life fully benefitting from her past lives inventions and making new ones, She doesn't know why but she never wants to get married or date anyone... That's because her love for you has ingrained itself into her soul... ah young love really beautiful... Now that brings us to why you get to reincarnate"

He gestures his hand a large number appears on my chest

" Because you were her inspiration this is the amount if karma you have accumulated, with this Karma I will let you have 4 wishes for your next life... You will only keep your memories of Marvel, and since I'm nice you can remember Bree but that's it"

I smile still sad but not as sad now that I get to be reincarnated " Is there any limit?"

" hmm not really, But keep in mind that their are cosmic being and if you are too powerful when your born than they will be able to find you and kill you before you get any stronger"

" Ok, First I want an immortal mind and body, Not where I can't die but I won't ever get tired and will only get stronger the more time goes on and my mind also won't be tired"

"Ok granted"

" Second I want an extremely keen sense"

" Be more specific"

" Ok what I mean is I can sense danger and emotions of people to tell what their feeling, And the danger sense I want everything to freeze until I move out of the danger so only I will be able to move, And to other people it will look like I just dodged fast"

"Ok granted"

"Give me a body like wolverine where he heals fast, But make it out of Vibranium instead"

" ok"

"Give me The power over natural forces like the king from GOH"

" Ok but I will have to Nerf it a bit..."

" how much?"

" You won't be able to have inertia or Planet toss until you get stronger, But everything else is fine"

" Ok thank you"

" Is there an appearance that you want?"

" Uhh make me look like Less muscley version of Ban"

"Got it... Good luck in your next life"

"Thanks" And with those word's I vanished

" Oh whoops I put him in the wrong timeline... Oh well he will be fine"

*1000Bc*

A Five year old helping move things with his father suddenly remember's thing's, first was Marvel and then his love, And lastly the god who reincarnated him

(Oh wow this is crazy!)

((Ahem Eli, It's me Stan I'm sorry to say that since you didn't specify the time period I put you in a random time period, Right now you are in a farm Close to Greece... Please keep in mind that God's walk along with men in these times and if you anger them They will kill you, Or try to... And also I decided to make your powers related ti the X-Gene, But once you turn 16 they will unlock... Also to give you the exact time period Apocalypse has just been Knocked out in his pyramid 3 day's ago so that shoukd give you a few hundred thousand years to get stronger... good luck and goodbye))

(What!! I have to wait so long for my powers and to make matters worse literal God's walk along with normal people right now)

" Hey Elekto get over here and help me with this" My father says to me

" Coming father" I walk over and help him

Unfortunately there was one person who Stan Couldn't hide Eli from and that women was watching Eli right now

" This child he has an aura of death all around him... I want him!!" a women with a hood over her with purple lipstick and white eyes staring into a crystal yells out

" Well... maybe I should just watch him for a while..."

Back to Eli who just shuddered (What was that... Eh probably nothing...) He thought to himself and went back to work helping his father move thing's around

(A/N: First Chapter Done, If you couldn't guess that women was Lady death and I decided to make it a little later than I first intended to so The timeline might be a little weird...)

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DerangedPirate
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Read Chapter one and chapter one only. While I most definetely am not an authority or knowledgeble on how reincarnation and karma should function, I don't believe this is the best way to go about it. The first issue I have with this is that somehow the acts of curing a disease and a virus counts towards his karma instead of the person who actually preformed those miracles (the girlfriend of the MC). Makes zero sense to me. He did not save her life, he did not inspire her to do so or aid her in the process of finding cures. He basically did f*ck all. Conclusion; People who preform acts that could infuence karma negatively or positively should have their own karma negatively or positively changed. The boyfriend(MC) of the person who actually preformed the acts of great renown in this case should recieve zilch, nothing, nada. The second ''Issue'' is more personal dislike orientated, though illogical decision making/missed opportunities (in my oppinion) plays a part; The 4 Wishes. The first wish makes him akin to Ban for Nanatsu no Taizai obviously. In other words superhuman, speed, strength and immortality. Dont understand why you didn't just frame the first wish like; I want the abilities of Ban from NNTZ with a change, that change being endless mental stamina instead of Bans {Snatch} ability but Ok. Would be more concice. So far no real issues here. The second wish is to my knowledge is exactly the same as Ultra instinct from DBZ Super or Observation Haki from One piece. Again If you framed it out like this it would be more concise. No real issues yet, so far so good. The third wish is mainly why I'm typing this review; ''A body with a fast healing factor like wolverine'' Made from Vibranium. I'm not an expert on NNTZ or Ban but I am damn sure Ban can near instantaneously heal from just about anything, Asking for another healing factor is completely redundant. The 2nd part of the 3rd Wish; A body made from vibranium, in my eyes is the same as wishing for a near indestructible body. If you want an indestructible body why not wish for armament haki without the ''seawater/water weakness'' from One Piece? It would go with the general theme of the second wish and complement each other. Unlike vibranium, armament haki can continue to evolve and strengthen. Also unlike a vibranium body Haki has many offensive capabilities aswell besides just having a body that's ''hard as steel'' and thus hurting significantly more when attacking. The only limit being mental fortitude and willpower but since you already made the MC ask for near limitless mental stamina I doubt this is a limit in the first place. If he did ask for armament haki he might aswell have asked for all 3 forms of haki without the seawater/water weakness in a singular wish, as the second wish. This would save him a wish (the 3rd Wish) and considering this ''God'' only had a slight objection towards the final wish I doubt he would disagree on the condition that the MC had to train and learn haki himself. This would give him something to works towards, instead of an instant near invulnerability from damage. It would also unlock a new avenue of growth and abilities, that being conqueror's Haki. The applications of wich could only be hindered by your own creativity. Conclusion; Wasted opportunities, illogical decision making.

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