Dropping this story or on hiatus has been going on my mind lately, here are some of the reasons. And also wanted to bring it to everyone's attention in case someone has some big-brain ideas or reasonable excuses to keep it. lmao
I believe I may have written into a situation where Madara's presence just ruins the storyline. I had a good idea and initial thoughts when I started this, but the more I wrote, the more I realized that I messed up. Without anyone of similar strengths to really challenge him, it makes no sense for him to bide his time.
I did try writing a way for that being he wants peace and not to be rebelled against the moment he loses strength(old age) or dies. So he would bide his time and even pretend and stick to it, but now I realize, he wouldn't really do this.
After all, he was the same man who wanted the other nations to submit to control to enact peace. Madara at this given moment can do all of that and more
He can easily genjutsu manipulate everyone at this point since no one can stop it besides gods, the same way of injecting chakra to stop a genjutsu, they can inject magic to disrupt his.
Like right now his opponents are just gonna be those Gods and their champions, but then the whole story is botched at this point since lot of fans come for the plot characters and interactions, me included.
and if Madara fought the champions he would find a way to win
unless he gets Rinngan he can't fight the gods or the gods would just smite him down and GG.
Also his Mangekyo makes him way too op, Kamui and Amaterasu, man can control the world in a night, sigh I self ruined my story.
I just feel lost, to be honest, it was a good try for my first writing experience. I have planned a new book for Arcane though as that was one of my new favourite shows at this moment.
I did have a new Game of Thrones fanfic idea, but that one is the workings, a hint is that it will be a bizarre adventure. This time I will write a proper draft to lead to an end, as this one currently with Madara's case was mainly off improv and impulsivity of wanting to write as a hobby.
ONCE AGAIN! I am happy to receive all the support up till now, it was a blessing, and I also need to work on not getting flustered or angry at some people's comments. For all those who supported me thank you.
I really do appreciate it. <3< p>
I will keep this chapter posted for a while to let everyone have a chance to read it, or if I'm somehow convinced to keep going, in which idek if Madara would be in the story for a longer time, otherwise he can just simply kill anyone who is his enemy instantly, ruining a lot of things.
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Unless that's cool with everyone, him going crazy and that's just what I write from here on out xD no one is spared if they cross him