[HIATUS] Surviving The Apocalypse (The Walking Dead)

I can't read this. There's no logic involved in writing this. the Author plans to make the zombies stronger then world war Z zombies. I don't get it just don't make your MC too OP and you wouldn't need to make the zombies more powerful. How is anyone without superpowers supposed to survive against billions of zombies strong enough to 1v1 an average adult. and they have to eat healthy so they don't loose all their muscles by the time the zombies are as fast and strong as a living man. the only way for anyone beside the MC to survive is if they get superpowers and OP walls so they can make their own food. Ammo is going to run out too if they don't start making their own but how would you protect all those places if you have zombies that can just climb any wall or bring it down with their sheer numbers. Please overthink you decision Author I for one can't imagine that you'll manage this without huge plotholes or giving every human superpowers which would make this story entirely unreadable for me.

Amazing job you can connect with the character both his new life experiences and the past life even though there is only three chapters if you keep this up you'll have a very popular fan fiction this has the potential to maybe even top the genre of correlating fanfiction if continued.

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it could have been good it really couldve. the author went from there being no magic to healing potions existing in one chapter. and whats with authors thinking its ok to have the mc reveal super important facts about themselves? i had such high hopes for this fic as there are no good TWD fics but this one shot down the drain as well

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man you are a fucking good writer and I wish for you to continue this book and make it as amazing as the first chapters you have been working on

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