in my opinion it is good despite the few views that has. the grammar is good, the world background hasn't been explored much but for now it is fine by me. the uploads are regular and the characters feel like real people. I would like more chapters but there isn't any need to rush.
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Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
it's nothing, I love your work [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
Romance?
Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
Kingdom building?
Super_nugget:Thank you, Constantine 15, for your review. While I'm not a famous author with a lot of visibility, you can help by rating, adding to your collection, and commenting. I'm already happy to have regular readers. The story will progress, and you'll see parts of the world from different perspectives. The war isn't over yet, and there's a second story in my folders (still just drafts like the upcoming chapters).
There will be a bit of romance, but that is not the main theme of this story. As for kingdom-building, I don't think so, because usually, you have a character who starts with nothing and ends up with everything. Even though history has a few figures like this, the best example in France being certainly Napoleon Bonaparte, it is something so exceptional that I don't think I am capable of creating a convincing story to place my protagonist at the head of a kingdom. Especially since he is relatively ordinary. He is not a superhuman with extensive knowledge in military strategy, urban planning, engineering, etc. While there is something cool about this idea, implementing it without breaking the realism would honestly be too complex for me.
Romance_guy:Kingdom building?
While agree with you not going with the kingdom building route (It’s kinda overdone in my opinion), i still think it’d be a waste if Adam the mc doesn’t end up spearheading some kind of movement in the novel, like maybe an early & less violent french revolution, transitioning france into a modern republic more smoother than in our timeline.
Super_nugget:There will be a bit of romance, but that is not the main theme of this story. As for kingdom-building, I don't think so, because usually, you have a character who starts with nothing and ends up with everything. Even though history has a few figures like this, the best example in France being certainly Napoleon Bonaparte, it is something so exceptional that I don't think I am capable of creating a convincing story to place my protagonist at the head of a kingdom. Especially since he is relatively ordinary. He is not a superhuman with extensive knowledge in military strategy, urban planning, engineering, etc. While there is something cool about this idea, implementing it without breaking the realism would honestly be too complex for me.
